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Dreaming~ (Inspired by a poem by him)
Softness underneath me
my head rests on a cloud
of wonder,
folded in your embrace
I feel warmth cover me
in my dreamy state,
tasting my cherry lips
your motion restores
my vision,
drowning me in divine
oblivion he explores
my deep treasure
my head rests on a cloud
of wonder,
folded in your embrace
I feel warmth cover me
in my dreamy state,
tasting my cherry lips
your motion restores
my vision,
drowning me in divine
oblivion he explores
my deep treasure
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20th Sep 2013 5:17pm
Re: Dreaming~ (Inspired by a poem by him)
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20th Sep 2013 10:49am
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20th Sep 2013 10:51am
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20th Sep 2013 5:18pm
Re: Dreaming~ (Inspired by a poem by him)
20th Sep 2013 11:55am
These less graphic pieces are all the more sensual for their making me want to feel it so deeply that I can taste it...it's not a memory, but rather a present experience. Nice.
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20th Sep 2013 5:19pm
Re: Dreaming~ (Inspired by a poem by him)
20th Sep 2013 2:50pm
Omgoodness! Sigh sigh sigh!! u make the dream feel like
a sensual high :)
a sensual high :)
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20th Sep 2013 5:19pm
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20th Sep 2013 5:20pm
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Anonymous
20th Sep 2013 6:23pm
Nice inspiration-poem tl.
strider!
strider!

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re: Re: Dreaming~ (Inspired by a poem by him)
26th Sep 2013 10:26pm
Re: Dreaming~ (Inspired by a poem by him)
Anonymous
20th Sep 2013 6:44pm
Sultry words, very sensual! Well done ;)

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