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you laugh…
What am I ready to do to get a nice laugh?
Just a little funny poem as an autograph?
You deserve more than just several verses
If I wish to see the large smiles on our faces
Play like a clown?
Act like a child?
Be a funny guy?
Look like a strange biker?
Be a wonderful Puss'n Boots?
Or just me with my charming smile!
I love your laugh
Is very juvenile
With sex appeal
As a nice giraffe
Just a little funny poem as an autograph?
You deserve more than just several verses
If I wish to see the large smiles on our faces
Play like a clown?
Act like a child?
Be a funny guy?
Look like a strange biker?
Be a wonderful Puss'n Boots?
Or just me with my charming smile!
I love your laugh
Is very juvenile
With sex appeal
As a nice giraffe
Published 18th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2013 00:31am
Hi Malin, sweet poem, cute and sexy, with minor flaws but overall very nice.
19th Sep 2013 7:09pm
Anonymous
19th Sep 2013 1:11am
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19th Sep 2013 7:16pm
Ah, the giraffe is a special mention to Jacques Prévert and his "opera of the giraffes" in "tales for naughty children" :
"As giraffes are dumb, the song remains locked into the head.
While looking very attentively at giraffes in the eyes which we can see if they sing off or if they sing true."
Thank you for your comment
"As giraffes are dumb, the song remains locked into the head.
While looking very attentively at giraffes in the eyes which we can see if they sing off or if they sing true."
Thank you for your comment
Anonymous
19th Sep 2013 2:33am
I've been feeling down lately, but that made my day
Nice work
Nice work
19th Sep 2013 7:18pm
