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Pushing the knife
It's not the thoughts of him
cheating that wields the knife.
If that happens it's already over.
It's the thoughts of him willing
to cheat with anyone given half
the chance that pushes the knife.
The thoughts of that alone will
keep it pushing slowly.
cheating that wields the knife.
If that happens it's already over.
It's the thoughts of him willing
to cheat with anyone given half
the chance that pushes the knife.
The thoughts of that alone will
keep it pushing slowly.
Published 14th Sep 2013
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14th Sep 2013 7:19am
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15th Sep 2013 6:25am
Sorry i was replying to both of you in one comment
Bad habbit of mine dartford
xoxo
Bad habbit of mine dartford
xoxo
14th Sep 2013 1:59pm
Liked the way you penned this Lookawaynow. Once peeps have in the head that someone is capable of doing something it's hard to get that thought of their head. But the knife is self inflicted.
S:)
S:)
14th Sep 2013 3:23pm
Hi sweethaven
Is the knife so self inflicted when you know that the
First opportunity for infidelity, he would? What does it say
For his loyalty and respect within that relationship.
Yes agreed to a point with you, in that it's about making changes together to cast away the blade.
Just it's often a one sided need for improvements within the relationship that digs deep
That is what I was attempting to write about
But thank you :) for commenting with a good opinion xD
Is the knife so self inflicted when you know that the
First opportunity for infidelity, he would? What does it say
For his loyalty and respect within that relationship.
Yes agreed to a point with you, in that it's about making changes together to cast away the blade.
Just it's often a one sided need for improvements within the relationship that digs deep
That is what I was attempting to write about
But thank you :) for commenting with a good opinion xD
Anonymous
14th Sep 2013 3:53pm
Once the seed of doubt enters it never leaves. Your serious deep side is just as interesting as your fun, loving humorous side. Enjoyed it tremendously :)
14th Sep 2013 4:07pm
Thankyou and agreed Vee
Serious v fun
Prefer fun with a side order of serious
Lol fun fun fun
Serious v fun
Prefer fun with a side order of serious
Lol fun fun fun
