If

all those feelings
expressed in words
which are just right
for the telling...

great poem...

One always hopes
for the right words
to properly express
oneself.
Thank you kindly, dartford!

Very good question indeed.
Well conveyed :)

Questions always matter, as where answers not always do.  
Thank you, Vee for your very  kind comment!

Hhhhmmmm who am I? why I am of flesh n bone
cracked soul darkened by night where light once roamed...
Oh, excuse I went far left huh? lol anywho, very powerful in so few words lady! :)

You're welcome to extend my little outburst, Poe :-). That's a good and dark contribution! Thank you!

dynamic!

I feel honored, catlady. Thank you so much for your lovely comment!

I always want to know. This is awesome.

You always want to know who the man is, you're with? Let me tell you: Sometimes you don't. Anyway, I appreciate your sweet words! Thank you!

forlorn with a tinge of resignation,
concisely great poem, chi.

You sensed the underlying mood, as always, J.. Let's pretend that forlornness and resignation belong to every relationship, at least once in a while. I feel honored by your comment.

I really wonder where this story will lead to, each time you build up a side line into it....
Intriguing write, Chi!

Ah, Liz, this will lead to nothing but heartache some day. The plot itself stays more or less the exciting same, whereas the side lines add more and more sadness and pain to the protagonists. But at least they(the side lines)help to keep the reader at it :-). Thank you deeply for your emotional support!

Not wanting to kiss. Not wanting close emotional contact... comes to mind. Good questions in this piece, Iris. Nicely conveyed message. Enjoyed the read a lot, my friend. :-)

Peace
Carlene

You're headed in the right direction, Carlene. But sometimes it's just what's required, although hard. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and questions with me! You know that I always appreciate your valuable comments.

sex is 'joie de vivre' of course, the desired path to euphoria.
but the kiss...
(my heart trembles!) the kiss is Romance itself...

Such a romantic comment, JF! Thank you so much!
A kiss ...
the door to bliss,
I'd say...

Why Miss, I am a man of lore
one who's kiss can open doors
Once kissed, these lips will part
with words to heal your whorish heart.
Mind you girl, I do not share
so IF you kiss my child you'll bear.

A lovely piece of work Miss, questions
are keys..each one has a door to open
they only need to be matched up. thanks
for the read.  quite fun!

WOW! I have to thank YOU for the so poetic and sexy comment in shape of yet another poem. You should publish it since it's lovely!

Seriously? you think for real?  if You say so, I will..:) thank You Miss. You're piece was just so lovely I felt an answer to your query and just went with it..afterward, I thought 'I hope she doesn't mind' *blushing with embarrassment*

No, she doesn't mind, on the contrary! And yes, she thinks for real :-).

then it's done dear lady..:)
I'll publish it with a note referring back to your original..if that's also okay?

It is :-)!