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Sea of Love
The love I have for you is without reason or design,
I give it unconditionally until the end of time
No matter how near or far apart we are,
I love
I need
I want you
You are my shinning star
Sometimes I wonder if your feelings have changed
I only know my heart aches, I want to hear you whisper
my name
This love is rare, it's special and true,
you will always have my love, that is my pledge
to you
Like floating on the waves of the deepest sea
your love is amazing, mystical, we are free
The right time, or wrong time, for all time
You and me
With you I soar, you love saved me
I give it unconditionally until the end of time
No matter how near or far apart we are,
I love
I need
I want you
You are my shinning star
Sometimes I wonder if your feelings have changed
I only know my heart aches, I want to hear you whisper
my name
This love is rare, it's special and true,
you will always have my love, that is my pledge
to you
Like floating on the waves of the deepest sea
your love is amazing, mystical, we are free
The right time, or wrong time, for all time
You and me
With you I soar, you love saved me
Published 11th Sep 2013
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11th Sep 2013 3:01pm
8th Feb 2014 3:12pm
Beautiful sentiment, smooth except the ending, I think you could've had a stronger ending but that's just my take... It's STILL beautiful as a whole :)
