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Through my eyes
Through my eyes,
nothings the same,
everything is darker,
it all seems so lame,
Through my eyes,
the insane is sane,
with reality turned upside down,
I live in constant pain,
Through my eyes,
love isn't real,
there is only this sadness,
I always feel.
nothings the same,
everything is darker,
it all seems so lame,
Through my eyes,
the insane is sane,
with reality turned upside down,
I live in constant pain,
Through my eyes,
love isn't real,
there is only this sadness,
I always feel.
Published 26th Dec 2010
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26th Dec 2010 7:39pm
this seems a little forced with a huge mission to rhyme everything with no regard for content compaired to your other work i red maybe put a little more time into it put more fluent ideas
26th Dec 2010 7:40pm
27th Dec 2010 9:38pm
Through my eyes,
the insane is sane,
with reality turned upside down,
i love these lines wouldnt go so far as to say its forced it depends where u were going with it i perhaps would have explained the sadness a bit further but on the whole i enjoyed it
26th Dec 2010 8:05pm
20th Jan 2011 2:25pm
21st Jan 2011 7:42pm
25th Mar 2012 3:13pm
Well, it wasn't terrible, I wouldn't say it was OVERLY forced... I just don't really see the point to the poem. You didn't really.. prove anything. If that makes any sense.
