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Breakup
But
how about
love and joy
you demandingly asked.
When hearts and souls don’t match
there isn’t much room for love and joy
I answered,
secreting away
my joyfully batting wings of love
from your cross-questioning eyes,
watching them
set out for newfound shores.
how about
love and joy
you demandingly asked.
When hearts and souls don’t match
there isn’t much room for love and joy
I answered,
secreting away
my joyfully batting wings of love
from your cross-questioning eyes,
watching them
set out for newfound shores.
Published 1st Sep 2013
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Anonymous
1st Sep 2013 6:39pm
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1st Sep 2013 9:31pm
Thank you so much for your kind comment, Amanecio. If one partner is moving on, physically and emotionally, there's nothing left to cling to. Glad you like it! xo
2nd Sep 2013 9:44pm
3rd Sep 2013 6:02pm
Yes. Liberation is sometimes the only way to save oneself. Thank you for your kind comment, hashman!
3rd Sep 2013 6:33pm
Sometimes what brings people together
is not enough to keep them together,
and that realization is encapsulated
succinctly in this poem.
is not enough to keep them together,
and that realization is encapsulated
succinctly in this poem.
3rd Sep 2013 8:23pm
Thank you so much, dear friend (and I mean it) for your always constructive, insightful and kind comments.
Anonymous
11th Sep 2013 8:25pm
Interesting what the mind thinks and the mouth utters.
Enjoyed it immensely :)
Enjoyed it immensely :)
11th Sep 2013 8:33pm
And often necessary to seperate it :-). Thank you, Vee for your kind comment and glad you enjoyed!
