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Tears of Pain
Pain inflicted on her was brutal,
a kiss wouldn't fix it this time,
no band aid big enough to close
the wound, his silence was heard
for too long, he couldn't say it,
he couldn't tell her he was sorry,
after giving herself to him, tortured
by him, controlled by him,
she would be the one to say it,
while tainted tears streaked her
face as she turned and walked away.
a kiss wouldn't fix it this time,
no band aid big enough to close
the wound, his silence was heard
for too long, he couldn't say it,
he couldn't tell her he was sorry,
after giving herself to him, tortured
by him, controlled by him,
she would be the one to say it,
while tainted tears streaked her
face as she turned and walked away.
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Re: Tears of Pain
1st Sep 2013 2:43pm
Breakups can be a fascinating subject if one has the strength to dig into them because of the differences in the way different people go about them, and our own biases. For example when we here about a friend's breakup we tend to console the friend and think poorly of the other figure. Then this is how we see other breaking up versus ourselves.
This give much food for thought.
This give much food for thought.
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re: Re: Tears of Pain
1st Sep 2013 3:04pm
So true Jazz, we always console the friend and hate the other person...thank you for reading and commenting. :)
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1st Sep 2013 2:55pm
I hope she did muster the strength to finally leave him...abuse should never be misconstrued as love. Thank you for the reminder :)
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re: Re: Tears of Pain
1st Sep 2013 3:10pm
I wish this had a happy ending but it doesn't, she's still there and he's still abusive, All I can do is be there for her when she finally takes that step...For now, I can't save her...she has to do that herself! I did however offer my husband for a little "Punching Bag 101" but she didn't except my gift!Maybe one day she will, and we can sit back and enjoy the lesson! ;)
Thank you for reading!
Thank you for reading!
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Thank God she has you...her guardian angel...with muscle :) BTW, I can't make your husband's course...darn it! Your friend reminds me of the Clare Danes character in "The Rainmaker" Where Matt Damon helps her escape from her bat wielding husband.
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1st Sep 2013 3:23pm
Anytime she wants his sissified ass kicked she knows where to look!All she has to do is ask! :-)
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Anonymous
1st Sep 2013 3:21pm
short, not so sweet, simple tl
thanks for writing this
strider
thanks for writing this
strider
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