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Night haiku-5

the morning after-
love stains on the bed-sheet
make them smile
...

vatsyayan

Written by vatsyayan

Published 24th Aug 2013

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Re: Night haiku-5

Anonymous

24th Aug 2013 3:01am

Don't be mad, and don't feel bad, but Haikus are 5,7,5. Your Haiku is 5,6,4. Despite that, nice job.