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The Ultimate Mirage
Ultimate Mirage[/font]
I'm sitting here,
just trying to put my thoughts to words.
Trying my best to explain,
how I see true love.
It is an illusion,
meant to capture a young girl's heart.
A weapon for a guy
to rip it apart.
True love,
is an anecdote
meant for fairy tales.
No wands, or magic,
no pretty little animals,
nor a charming mate.
True love,
legendary as stories of ghosts.
People come to you preaching
this unknown feeling,
believe it you may, I don't.
In today's generation,
true love,
has come to extinction.
The term with no depth
sour, now meaningless,
I have no heart to believe in it,
I am faithless.
It is not real,
a hallucination,
the constricted chest,
of an unborn sensation.
It is a trick,
of the minds way of sabotage.
Don't fall in too deep. so reality check,
my advise, as a friend.
True love, is the ultimate Mirage.
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I'm sitting here,
just trying to put my thoughts to words.
Trying my best to explain,
how I see true love.
It is an illusion,
meant to capture a young girl's heart.
A weapon for a guy
to rip it apart.
True love,
is an anecdote
meant for fairy tales.
No wands, or magic,
no pretty little animals,
nor a charming mate.
True love,
legendary as stories of ghosts.
People come to you preaching
this unknown feeling,
believe it you may, I don't.
In today's generation,
true love,
has come to extinction.
The term with no depth
sour, now meaningless,
I have no heart to believe in it,
I am faithless.
It is not real,
a hallucination,
the constricted chest,
of an unborn sensation.
It is a trick,
of the minds way of sabotage.
Don't fall in too deep. so reality check,
my advise, as a friend.
True love, is the ultimate Mirage.
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Published 22nd Aug 2013
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22nd Aug 2013 7:09pm
As I said.it's often hard to believe in something we've never seen/known.Give it time your young yet my dear...
22nd Aug 2013 8:23pm
I will, but it's highly doubtful.
but I'm patient... and very good, at waiting. ;-)
but I'm patient... and very good, at waiting. ;-)
22nd Aug 2013 11:37pm
23rd Aug 2013 3:26am
23rd Aug 2013 6:02am
You know I'm not usually into the whole Love Poem thing, but this is very good. I like it.
23rd Aug 2013 7:05am
24th Aug 2013 12:47pm
Incredibly powerful ... each new piece your putting out is more and more dynamic
LSP
LSP
24th Aug 2013 9:26pm
2nd Sep 2013 11:56am
I like your entire style and way of expression. I just noticed you tonight in the threads i read your entry for mommy dearest. i see me in your work and you in mine. hello there.. nice to meet you.
2nd Sep 2013 6:17pm
Thank You very much.
I'm glad you liked my worked.
Nice to meet you as well,
now that you've said, our works reflect each other, I'll definitely read some of your scribes
Darker
I'm glad you liked my worked.
Nice to meet you as well,
now that you've said, our works reflect each other, I'll definitely read some of your scribes
Darker
