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The Battle Of Seattle

Some random junk I put together after listening to my favorite band(I bet you can guess who). It's rough, so constructive criticism is appreciated.


If I fuck you
Will I get closer to him?
Or are we all that mesmerized
With the voice, coming down the hill
Telling us the way to God?

No, it’s nothing like that
I just thought of thinking
And it pushed me decades back
To my fetus form, swimming
Knowing nothing of the truth

Jesus was a carpenter
Not some punk kid
I get the parallels
But he told me what I wanted to hear
Made me high without a drop

And you’re you, somebody’s
Virgin Mary, stained with a past
That you played no part in
I overreacted to a story
You don’t even remember

Your eyes are piercing through me
Right at this moment of chaotic dullness
I’m surrendering for what, I don’t know
As the space needle slips into the sky
And the sludge slides down the mountain

Written by Kurdt94 (Mike K.)
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