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Lessons in Lectures of love….
You weave wondrous webs with words
Practise percolate perfect & perform
You spin sexy synonyms secretly seducing sanctions
Litigate lustful liaisons languidly
You school this student serendipitously
Tormenting teasing tantalising
You acquire avant garde aptitude
Cautiously coaxing committed candour
You reward religiously rightfully
Manifesting in momentarily madness & mayhem
You devise in detailed determination
Her orgasm in opaque oblivion
Published 11th Aug 2013
| Edited 31st Jul 2017
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11th Aug 2013 7:25pm
Alliteration nation, a dashing for fashion, whoever it is who has coaxed you so, needs a reward for this poetry show.
11th Aug 2013 8:10pm
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11th Aug 2013 8:47pm
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13th Aug 2013 8:55pm
Lovin the flow...exquisite arrangement of verbiage wrapped in the depth of your meaning...this resonates...
18th Aug 2013 8:56am
Oh Goodness! This was Incredible!
I love the way you manipulated words throughout this piece! Amazing Read! Xo
I love the way you manipulated words throughout this piece! Amazing Read! Xo
18th Aug 2013 12:23pm
8th Aug 2017 2:31am
your diction felt too heavy. I like the organization, structure, and idea behind this piece.
