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my head feels like I want to explode
explode
burn
rip
kill
sharpen
bite open thousands of people
explode
burn
rip
kill
sharpen
make every knife in every hand violent
explode
burn
rip
kill
sharpen
stab all the meat to drown this world in blood and guts
explode
burn
rip
kill
sharpen
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHH
explode
burn
rip
kill
sharpen to open
y
o
u
u
p
explode
burn
rip
kill
sharpen
bite open thousands of people
explode
burn
rip
kill
sharpen
make every knife in every hand violent
explode
burn
rip
kill
sharpen
stab all the meat to drown this world in blood and guts
explode
burn
rip
kill
sharpen
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHH
explode
burn
rip
kill
sharpen to open
y
o
u
u
p
Published 12th Dec 2010
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21st Feb 2012 7:32pm
21st Feb 2012 7:54pm
18th Mar 2012 8:03pm
A very angry poem indeed!!!!!!!!!! But written really well, I like the reptitiveness and the few disturbing lines inbetween- you've pushed alot of rage out in so little!!!!!!!!!!!
