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What I Should See
Can anyone
show me that real love is true?
Not just a
word one will say to you.
Not just a
word to make someone have pride.
Not
something one feels, when they just have lied.
People try
to preach to me and tell me its there.
I tell them
I want to see, show me where.
They tell me
I will know, when I feel it in my heart.
I say I
don't have one, it had been torn apart.
I look one
in their eyes and tell them to show me.
They tell me
that they feel it, that I should see.
I don't see
anything, from within my eyes.
I feel that
there is no love, it is just a bunch of lies.
show me that real love is true?
Not just a
word one will say to you.
Not just a
word to make someone have pride.
Not
something one feels, when they just have lied.
People try
to preach to me and tell me its there.
I tell them
I want to see, show me where.
They tell me
I will know, when I feel it in my heart.
I say I
don't have one, it had been torn apart.
I look one
in their eyes and tell them to show me.
They tell me
that they feel it, that I should see.
I don't see
anything, from within my eyes.
I feel that
there is no love, it is just a bunch of lies.
Published 12th Dec 2010
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14th Dec 2010 1:10am
29th May 2012 1:58am
We definitely have all felt this at one point or another.
But if love wasn't real, would it really hurt so much when it's taken away? Even if it was a falsehood, to one person, it can't be false to you if it was able to tear your heart apart. Loveless hearts can't be broken. <3 In my opinion.
Nicely done jrh187 :-)
But if love wasn't real, would it really hurt so much when it's taken away? Even if it was a falsehood, to one person, it can't be false to you if it was able to tear your heart apart. Loveless hearts can't be broken. <3 In my opinion.
Nicely done jrh187 :-)
