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Poison
Surely you are made of poison
and my lips should dare not touch,
But the urge to taste what may be deadly
Intrigues my mind so much.
and my lips should dare not touch,
But the urge to taste what may be deadly
Intrigues my mind so much.
Published 6th Aug 2013
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6th Aug 2013 6:34am
6th Aug 2013 7:00am
Thank You! I didnt really know what to do with this. I had something totally different in mind and this was only supposed to be the beginning but after i got those 4 lines down i went blank and after staring at it for an hour i realized it wasnt meant to be any more than this. so i left it at this. And I'm glad you like it. i am pretty happy with it too so i'm glad im not the only one.
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