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comets
Comets whizz by
Down the toilet of space
Into the unknown sludge
Black
Eternal stench
Comets whizz by
2/4/10 5:35:06 PM
Published 11th Dec 2010
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Anonymous
11th May 2011 4:39pm
I like the utter simplicity of this piece. The line about, "the toilet of space" made me chuckle. Are you referring to black holes?
