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Otter
Otters hold hands while sleeping
so that they don't float away.
I learned that today
and I just keep thinking about that.
About a connection
preventing you from getting lost.
I'm not always good at connecting,
but I hope to find my otter one day.
So that I don't float away.
so that they don't float away.
I learned that today
and I just keep thinking about that.
About a connection
preventing you from getting lost.
I'm not always good at connecting,
but I hope to find my otter one day.
So that I don't float away.
Published 30th Jul 2013
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30th Jul 2013 5:48am
They say a poem or short story need 3 things to be successful Hook opening - Line body - sinker closing
Your poem had all 3 - very nice I smiled as I read it!
Your poem had all 3 - very nice I smiled as I read it!
