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Nothing Matters
Felt a snowflake
melt in front of
universal mind.
Watched the day break
dusk defy your
summer dreams in kind.
Filtered heartthrob
without sunrise,
everything’s okay.
Nothing matters
just keep moving,
night might turn to day.
melt in front of
universal mind.
Watched the day break
dusk defy your
summer dreams in kind.
Filtered heartthrob
without sunrise,
everything’s okay.
Nothing matters
just keep moving,
night might turn to day.
Published 26th Jul 2013
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27th Jul 2013 6:52pm
5th Sep 2013 9:05am
Cryptic first stanza reminding us of coming winter. Nothing really matters, as the state of matter changes from one form to another.
Suggest to replace "night might turn to day." with something else that is not a fact. For example: someday your heart might melt
(like the snowflake in your first stanza)
Way to go, LoveMinusZero...good luck!
Suggest to replace "night might turn to day." with something else that is not a fact. For example: someday your heart might melt
(like the snowflake in your first stanza)
Way to go, LoveMinusZero...good luck!
