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The Land of Amaizement
What lies beneath this cornfield?
I can not say aloud...
Shh...shhhhh!!
I'll tell you in your ear...
What lies beneath this cornfield is the Land of Amaizement!
Where corny jokes are the funniest
Yellow is the lovliest
And the Kernal is even higher than the army's General
In the Land of Amaizement
You'd make great friends to peas
The King And Queen sit on their cobs
And make amends throughout
They keep away the Flakes who try to ruin the kingdom with thier
Dry, crunchy ways
Then pray to Lord Harvest to keep them healthy
And continue to build thier world from starch to finish
I can say no more
You'll have to see the rest for yourself
Go ahead and dig deep to the Land of Amaizement...
I can not say aloud...
Shh...shhhhh!!
I'll tell you in your ear...
What lies beneath this cornfield is the Land of Amaizement!
Where corny jokes are the funniest
Yellow is the lovliest
And the Kernal is even higher than the army's General
In the Land of Amaizement
You'd make great friends to peas
The King And Queen sit on their cobs
And make amends throughout
They keep away the Flakes who try to ruin the kingdom with thier
Dry, crunchy ways
Then pray to Lord Harvest to keep them healthy
And continue to build thier world from starch to finish
I can say no more
You'll have to see the rest for yourself
Go ahead and dig deep to the Land of Amaizement...
Published 7th Jul 2013
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7th Jul 2013 7:23pm
7th Jul 2013 7:25pm
thankyou so much! I wrote this for a compitition called "The Corn Field" :-)
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2013 10:28pm
enjoyed this, upbeat read :) x
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Anonymous
8th Jul 2013 00:53am
Great read, really enjoyed :) x
8th Jul 2013 00:59am
8th Jul 2013 4:42am
Clever work, BZ. The puns are terrific. Note a couple typos where thier should be their. Nice job!
8th Jul 2013 4:49am
Thankyou Tony...I always mess that one up...I'll keep a sharper eye next time :-)
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27th Jul 2013 5:26pm
You have a lot of talent and I like all art and poetry
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I love cheesy poetry and cheesy art, classical poetry and classical art, black artists, urban art, black poetry, urban poetry, all of it morden poetry and modern art
27th Jul 2013 5:33pm
As do I :-) its all a form of creation by someone which makes it extrordinary...Thanks for reading...
