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Do you feel good when i feel worse?
Come to me only when you need me
Use me, never improve me
Break me down, never up
Watch me bleed, never get help
Expose me, don't you dare cover for me
Lie to me, i hate the truth
Hate me, loves not for everyone
Come to me only when you need to make yourself feel better.
Use me, never improve me
Break me down, never up
Watch me bleed, never get help
Expose me, don't you dare cover for me
Lie to me, i hate the truth
Hate me, loves not for everyone
Come to me only when you need to make yourself feel better.
Published 4th Jul 2013
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15th Jul 2013 8:46pm
I like the interplay of opposites. My favorite line: "Lie to me, i hate the truth" The short, imperative lines give the poem power. Nice write.
