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luke's song
luke's gone
the only one around
now
he tells me as it is,
and i'd make this the best poem i could
because it's about him.
i've said it before
"a heart doesn't always have to break
because of a relationship
it can be anything,
anything at all."
i
should of been there
when.
the only one around
now
he tells me as it is,
and i'd make this the best poem i could
because it's about him.
i've said it before
"a heart doesn't always have to break
because of a relationship
it can be anything,
anything at all."
i
should of been there
when.
Published 3rd Jul 2013
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2013 11:12pm
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4th Jul 2013 3:55pm
10th Jul 2013 7:10pm
An emotional write, I love the deep narrative
silence after the last line.
:)
silence after the last line.
:)
