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Waking Up Somewhere
As the sun rises
in the North
I'm craving you,
the temperature
boils in
the South
while you picture
me,
the whisper of
the wind,
images of a
star filled night
sky,
thoughts of you
and I,
our paths will
cross and we'll
embrace,
heartbeats will
start to race,
your hands touch my
soft skin,
let the addiction
begin,
painting a picture
in my mind I
share it with
you,
adding to the
canvas you tell me
your vision,
vividly we escape
into private
chambers,
waking up
somewhere
with the rising sun
together
in the North
I'm craving you,
the temperature
boils in
the South
while you picture
me,
the whisper of
the wind,
images of a
star filled night
sky,
thoughts of you
and I,
our paths will
cross and we'll
embrace,
heartbeats will
start to race,
your hands touch my
soft skin,
let the addiction
begin,
painting a picture
in my mind I
share it with
you,
adding to the
canvas you tell me
your vision,
vividly we escape
into private
chambers,
waking up
somewhere
with the rising sun
together
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29th Jun 2013 3:36pm
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Anonymous
29th Jun 2013 4:26pm
reminds me of the beatles song here comes the sun
strider...
strider...
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29th Jun 2013 5:13pm
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29th Jun 2013 5:38pm
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Anonymous
29th Jun 2013 6:06pm
Simply gorgeous, beautiful and serene!! :)
Love these lines:
"our paths will
cross and we'll
embrace,
heartbeats will
start to race,
your hands touch my
soft skin,
let the addiction
begin, "
Love these lines:
"our paths will
cross and we'll
embrace,
heartbeats will
start to race,
your hands touch my
soft skin,
let the addiction
begin, "
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29th Jun 2013 6:21pm
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Anonymous
30th Jun 2013 00:14am
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30th Jun 2013 00:35am
LMFAO....I cannot perform miracles, not that powerful anyway!! :) thank you Gabriel ;)
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1st Jul 2013 12:12pm
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1st Jul 2013 1:01pm
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2013 10:08pm
I love this, so beautifully written:)
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3rd Jul 2013 10:19pm
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 4:24am
You've gone way past " old school " with this one
You've gone back to
" cave men and apes "
You've gone back to
" cave men and apes "
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