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.DEAD temptation. part 2
Once I felt the pain, I kept wanting more.
[Losing my sanity. I kept wanting more...]
Each old scar freshly open again.
[Something I said wouldn't happen again...]
Darkness has a hold of me and won't let go.
[This crazy addiction seriously needs to go...]
With the past silently haunting me i'm losing my mind.
[With those people abusing me i'm losing my mind...]
Sometimes I wish this torture would simply end.
[death is the only way the pain will finally end...]
This knife is my friend but also my enemy.
[if you play with my mind you'll become my enemy...]
Say goodbye to this lifeless soul.
[bury my regret with this lifeless soul...]
[Losing my sanity. I kept wanting more...]
Each old scar freshly open again.
[Something I said wouldn't happen again...]
Darkness has a hold of me and won't let go.
[This crazy addiction seriously needs to go...]
With the past silently haunting me i'm losing my mind.
[With those people abusing me i'm losing my mind...]
Sometimes I wish this torture would simply end.
[death is the only way the pain will finally end...]
This knife is my friend but also my enemy.
[if you play with my mind you'll become my enemy...]
Say goodbye to this lifeless soul.
[bury my regret with this lifeless soul...]
Published 23rd Nov 2010
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30th Nov 2010 8:16am
you've expressed yourself freely in this poem, all your hurt and pain. not many people can do this and get away with it. especially your stuff on cutting. i hope things in your life will get easier.
my favourite line was "This knife is my friend but also my enemy. [if you play with my mind you'll become my enemy...]" it's so sinister and revengeful. another amazing poem sarah. keep it up xxx
my favourite line was "This knife is my friend but also my enemy. [if you play with my mind you'll become my enemy...]" it's so sinister and revengeful. another amazing poem sarah. keep it up xxx
30th Nov 2010 6:48pm
