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Rosea all is utopian
Kind of like a tinpot storm
black cracked pepper sky
rooster and crows
twirling
In
wind
All is utopia
man shall love man
words are a sham
two goddesses
Moura windy rainy
Rosea await in the wings
All loves in a ditch
the morning sunrise springs a surprise
for her
who lies on a bed of roses
each dewy morning
self portrait
for hermit
Maybe she is amazed
for time is money
and money's tight
sensitive man
where's
your
day
black cracked pepper sky
rooster and crows
twirling
In
wind
All is utopia
man shall love man
words are a sham
two goddesses
Moura windy rainy
Rosea await in the wings
All loves in a ditch
the morning sunrise springs a surprise
for her
who lies on a bed of roses
each dewy morning
self portrait
for hermit
Maybe she is amazed
for time is money
and money's tight
sensitive man
where's
your
day
Published 25th Jun 2013
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25th Jun 2013 5:05pm
I think,
'sensitive man
where's
your
day'
is a really interesting set of words, especially in how it diminishes down to a point, and how you're kind of presented with something that feels like a start, at the end. 'All loves in a ditch' seems kind of similar in that it gives you this strange twist of words without much explanation - and I liked that.
'sensitive man
where's
your
day'
is a really interesting set of words, especially in how it diminishes down to a point, and how you're kind of presented with something that feels like a start, at the end. 'All loves in a ditch' seems kind of similar in that it gives you this strange twist of words without much explanation - and I liked that.
25th Jun 2013 5:46pm
Thank you it's nice to know people read my stuff thank you,I do appreciate it
