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music to whispers
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discordant
notes fill the air
they rain down
sharp pieces of glass
stabbing me
until me blood was on the floor
tears were quick to flow
words were quick to fly free
slaps were quick to land on me
love was quick to fly away
simple
quiet
whispers fill my ears
they fill me up
like sunlight upon the earth
loving me
until I learned to love myself
passion was quick to be born
hope was quick to last
caresses were quick to please
love was quick to last
discordant
notes fill the air
they rain down
sharp pieces of glass
stabbing me
until me blood was on the floor
tears were quick to flow
words were quick to fly free
slaps were quick to land on me
love was quick to fly away
simple
quiet
whispers fill my ears
they fill me up
like sunlight upon the earth
loving me
until I learned to love myself
passion was quick to be born
hope was quick to last
caresses were quick to please
love was quick to last
Published 21st Jun 2013
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21st Jun 2013 10:56pm
21st Jun 2013 11:04pm
22nd Jun 2013 10:12pm
so glad I read this, I'm picky at what poems I read and I really like this, I'm not gonna lie, I'd like to use a line or two for some time in the future for a new poem, that's if you don't mind :-)
22nd Jun 2013 10:17pm
23rd Jun 2013 00:16am
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