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what (is it) makes the sun
what (is it)
makes the sun warmer?
what (is it???)
makes the grass greener
what (is it) makes the stars
shine (so much) brighter
at night (when holding
hands with another???)
why is it we are in love
when we think
we are in love
and everything is better
and brighter when seen
through the eyes of love?
makes the sun warmer?
what (is it???)
makes the grass greener
what (is it) makes the stars
shine (so much) brighter
at night (when holding
hands with another???)
why is it we are in love
when we think
we are in love
and everything is better
and brighter when seen
through the eyes of love?
Published 17th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
17th Jun 2013 8:22pm
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17th Jun 2013 8:25pm
You are always so sweet, Gabe! Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks. I truly appreciate them. xo
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
17th Jun 2013 8:34pm
Great title & poem, Faith. Like the questioning theme. I think love must be some kind of magical potion. It definitely changes the state of the heart. :D
*Peace 'n Love* Carlene
*Peace 'n Love* Carlene
17th Jun 2013 9:13pm
You are so right about it changing the heart. I was trying to capture that magical feeling in these words. Love makes everything seem wonderful! So pleased you enjoyed my little poem.
17th Jun 2013 8:39pm
17th Jun 2013 9:14pm
18th Jun 2013 00:14am
love burns bright within the soul and makes everything sooo much better!
Great write Faith!.
Cheers! Scot.
Great write Faith!.
Cheers! Scot.
18th Jun 2013 3:26am
Anonymous
18th Jun 2013 11:29am
LOve is so special, one can never tell its tale completely, you are right about that Faith, good to read your encouraging poetry again!
18th Jun 2013 2:25pm
Thank you so much, Mourganna. So wonderful to see you have graced my page with your presence. Love-Faith
18th Jun 2013 2:08pm
18th Jun 2013 2:26pm
Thank you very much, Amazon. I appreciate your comment very much. Love-Faith
25th Jun 2013 1:00am
Love is so beautiful, that it shines brighter than the sun.....
Nice write dear Faith! xo
Nice write dear Faith! xo
25th Jun 2013 1:47am
10th Jun 2015 3:03pm
Wow! I'm so glad I ran into this gem today. Its been a couple years since you've posted it but its still so simply elegant and powerful!
My soul truly echos your sentiment about how everything is brighter when seen through the eyes of love! Amazing ink!
Here's to you (and to love!)!
My soul truly echos your sentiment about how everything is brighter when seen through the eyes of love! Amazing ink!
Here's to you (and to love!)!
2nd Jul 2015 4:03am
