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Rose Red
Rose, rose my sweet rose red
doth thou see thy fate ahead?
The heavens cry dark arsenic rains
poisoning thy fragile veins
Rose, rose, my sweet rose pale
the liquid death hath left thou frail
weak and withered, spirit worn
with stems turned black and petals torn...
(June 11, 2013)
doth thou see thy fate ahead?
The heavens cry dark arsenic rains
poisoning thy fragile veins
Rose, rose, my sweet rose pale
the liquid death hath left thou frail
weak and withered, spirit worn
with stems turned black and petals torn...
(June 11, 2013)
Published 14th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 10:32pm
Darkly poetic..you gave this poem
substance, a shape, a feel to it so
to speak. A couple of my favorite
lines: The heavens cry dark arsenic rains
poisoning thy fragile veins
the liquid death hath left thou frail
Welcome to DU:)
substance, a shape, a feel to it so
to speak. A couple of my favorite
lines: The heavens cry dark arsenic rains
poisoning thy fragile veins
the liquid death hath left thou frail
Welcome to DU:)
15th Jun 2013 4:33am
That's sweet of you to say, thank you very much. :) I will definitely check out some of your work too soon!
15th Jun 2013 1:23am
15th Jun 2013 4:34am
Awe, thank you! I love your last description there, the beginning of a beautiful poem in itself :)
Anonymous
19th Jun 2013 5:59pm
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19th Jun 2013 6:04pm
Thank you! :) I will stay, it's a lovely site and it's members are just as wonderful!
