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Jekyll and Hyde
A fine morning...
Saw my little brother playing,
joined him for a bit,
Then ate something quickly,
guzzle some coffee
After it, rush to my mama
to kiss her bye bye--
Then there's this moment of silence,
memory gaps and empty spaces...
Found myself
in the bed of somebody else--
Struggling, grinding and writhing
Him, savagely stroking and thrusting
My fingernails sinking
and scratching
Curses and profanities
spewing through of each other's
gritted teeth
Bodies both buried deep
In between the dirty sheets
Screaming, moaning and groaning--
who's who are those from
unknown and uncared for
Then felt my head being thrashed
carelessly on that cold metal pole...
Again there's this same moment of silence,
memory gaps and blank spaces...
Walking back home
confused and bewildered
I closed my eyes
then pulled my own hair hard
Trying to remember,
Thinking deep--
Not getting anything...
Published 15th Nov 2010
| Edited 27th Nov 2010
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15th Nov 2010 9:26pm
16th Nov 2010 00:09am
18th Nov 2010 5:16pm
Love it!Q!Q I was born on a hot day in August..Everyone I touch thinks I'm burning up...I also like your January poem:)
18th Nov 2010 5:32pm
19th Nov 2010 1:21pm
"A fine morning...
Saw my little brother playing,
joined him for a bit,
Then eat something quickly,
guzzle some coffee
After it, rush to my mama
to kiss her bye bye--".......SWEET, I'M SMITTEN
"Then there's this moment of silence,
memory gaps and empty spaces..."...........................................MYSTERIOUS, I'M DRAWN IN
"Found myself
in the bed of somebody else's--
Struggling, grinding and writhing
Him, savagely stroking and thrusting
My fingernails sinking
and scratching
Curses and profanities
spewing out of each other's
gritted teeth
Bodies both buried deep
In between the dirty sheets"...............SEXY, I'M HOT&BOTHERED
"Then felt my head being thrashed
carelessly on that cold metal pole...".......INTERESTING, I'M CURIOUS
"Again there's this same moment of silence,
memory gaps and blank spaces...
Walking back home
confuse and bewildered
I closed my eyes
then pulled my own hair hard
Trying to remember,
Thinking deep--
Not getting anything..."............................................................PERFECT, I'M IMPRESSED
Saw my little brother playing,
joined him for a bit,
Then eat something quickly,
guzzle some coffee
After it, rush to my mama
to kiss her bye bye--".......SWEET, I'M SMITTEN
"Then there's this moment of silence,
memory gaps and empty spaces..."...........................................MYSTERIOUS, I'M DRAWN IN
"Found myself
in the bed of somebody else's--
Struggling, grinding and writhing
Him, savagely stroking and thrusting
My fingernails sinking
and scratching
Curses and profanities
spewing out of each other's
gritted teeth
Bodies both buried deep
In between the dirty sheets"...............SEXY, I'M HOT&BOTHERED
"Then felt my head being thrashed
carelessly on that cold metal pole...".......INTERESTING, I'M CURIOUS
"Again there's this same moment of silence,
memory gaps and blank spaces...
Walking back home
confuse and bewildered
I closed my eyes
then pulled my own hair hard
Trying to remember,
Thinking deep--
Not getting anything..."............................................................PERFECT, I'M IMPRESSED
19th Nov 2010 1:49pm
i like how you break down you're thoughts in fragments like that... many thanks to you! :)
24th Nov 2010 10:04am
In your writing you show your pride as well as shame in your sensuality, or maybe your choices in the expression of it.
24th Nov 2010 12:32pm
Haha, i dont blame you why you said that, you probably notice in my writngs that I'm always going back and forth on the both side of things... thanks for following my works, i appreciate it :)
24th Nov 2010 11:03pm
25th Nov 2010 6:54am
