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Thought you were dead..
I woke up this morning thinking you were dead.
I was lost for a moment thinking it's a shame.
As I had no tears left to shed.
I was lost for a moment thinking it's a shame.
As I had no tears left to shed.
Published 22nd May 2013
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23rd May 2013 5:10am
Hello.
There are many ways to interpret this as it is so short. I have the most options for the last line. Short, clear but not simple. I like it.
I hope this feedback helps.
There are many ways to interpret this as it is so short. I have the most options for the last line. Short, clear but not simple. I like it.
I hope this feedback helps.
