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dream a nightmare
The images of animals and creatures that lurk far in the conscience
Creeping out of the dark corners to watch you and become an audience
the claws that reach out of the darkness
you see talons that have a shining sharpness
that cuts you so deeply
you begin to feel weakly
pain throbbing quickly
the taste of blood so sickly
closing your eyes to black
wondering if you are still being attacked
coldness fills you slowly
you feel so lowly
gasping for air to a burst of light
thankful there is not one shadow in sight
Lying awake you think about what made you so terrified
You don’t think you could fall back asleep even if you tried
Creeping out of the dark corners to watch you and become an audience
the claws that reach out of the darkness
you see talons that have a shining sharpness
that cuts you so deeply
you begin to feel weakly
pain throbbing quickly
the taste of blood so sickly
closing your eyes to black
wondering if you are still being attacked
coldness fills you slowly
you feel so lowly
gasping for air to a burst of light
thankful there is not one shadow in sight
Lying awake you think about what made you so terrified
You don’t think you could fall back asleep even if you tried
Published 29th Oct 2010
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30th Oct 2010 4:08am
Wow i do like the fact you rhyme and how you do it, even though more mutli's(If you want to get serious with rhyming) and I think you got it in the bag *good*.
30th Oct 2010 4:50am
wow thanks you are so awsome i just read your comment for my other one. you sound like you know what good poetry looks like and i'm glad you like mine=)
