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meeting
we embraced and every atom of my being
was calling out for you
it's the itch of dope heads
we crave you like nothing else
in those moment
it felt like the whole world went quiet and overcast
and we were in some unknown smokey room
with no one but us
there was a hint of opium in the air
which made evething tired and slow
everything...
every touch was so soft and warm
I felt like I could melt into you
and there was no one but us
was calling out for you
it's the itch of dope heads
we crave you like nothing else
in those moment
it felt like the whole world went quiet and overcast
and we were in some unknown smokey room
with no one but us
there was a hint of opium in the air
which made evething tired and slow
everything...
every touch was so soft and warm
I felt like I could melt into you
and there was no one but us
Published 27th Oct 2010
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28th Oct 2010 4:16pm
That final repetition of 'no one but us' is enchanting...there's a surreal magnetic pull to it.
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28th Oct 2010 6:25pm
