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Stitched
Impulses that thrash
in the chambers of red
have trembled in fear
of what you have said
you reign over me
with those crimson lips
that slender seduction
that drips from your legs
upon my withering self
dominating my senses
you've caged my soul
your attraction belies
about what you desire
knowing you too well
I'll still sear in the fire
your nails drill into my spine
with lust and cruelty so kind
so humble, so sweet i beg
for you to devour me
leave not a morsel behind
I'm lost in your hair
slipping from your back
releasing your garments
my tongue will caress
a slave to your touch
held in your bust
this is how much I love you
your skin be stitched to mine.
in the chambers of red
have trembled in fear
of what you have said
you reign over me
with those crimson lips
that slender seduction
that drips from your legs
upon my withering self
dominating my senses
you've caged my soul
your attraction belies
about what you desire
knowing you too well
I'll still sear in the fire
your nails drill into my spine
with lust and cruelty so kind
so humble, so sweet i beg
for you to devour me
leave not a morsel behind
I'm lost in your hair
slipping from your back
releasing your garments
my tongue will caress
a slave to your touch
held in your bust
this is how much I love you
your skin be stitched to mine.
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Re: Stitched
15th May 2013 2:16pm
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damn bro
one-three.. wow
read like your protagonist was/is real easy pickin's
i guess its what they say
a stich in time saves nine or mine or
somethin like that! = )
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damn bro
one-three.. wow
read like your protagonist was/is real easy pickin's
i guess its what they say
a stich in time saves nine or mine or
somethin like that! = )
.
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Re: Stitched
15th May 2013 3:41pm
Re: Stitched
15th May 2013 6:01pm
Whew! You naughty sexy devil you! ;)
"your nails drill into my spine
with lust and cruelty so kind
so humble, so sweet i beg
for you to devour me"<--mmmmm.....
"your nails drill into my spine
with lust and cruelty so kind
so humble, so sweet i beg
for you to devour me"<--mmmmm.....
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17th May 2013 11:53pm
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16th May 2013 00:33am
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17th May 2013 11:54pm
thank you 69 :) that last line was pure fluke. didn't think i'd be able to end it like that :P
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16th May 2013 2:40am
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2013 9:07pm
Fascinating poem and well written - love and pain so often intertwined.
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7th Jun 2013 6:14pm