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Visions Of Me
Underneath my shear top
my round tits hide
my nipples peek through
to the other side
Standing before you in
my white cotton panties
you put your hand in
the air and motion for
me to spin so you can
see my fanny
Admiring the way my
body moves how my
top clings to me as it
rubs on my tits
Bringing yourself into
me so your face is deep
in my neck you smell
me while your hand
finds it's way to my
moist slit
In between undies and
flesh your fingers crave
my dampness tapping
and twisting
I tilt my head back my
long blonde hair falls
cascading down my
back as you're lips do
the kissing
This vision of me is
so real you can feel
my hard nipples pressed
against your chest
You can feel my wet
heat in your hand as
you spread my nest
At the small of my back
your hand soothes me
your tender touch
moves me
Your eyes flutter open
to a lonely room where
shadows are cast
along the walls
With heavy breathing
and sweaty skin you
relax and squeeze
your balls
Another night dreaming
of me having me in
your vision
You curl your lips and
smile you know you
are driven
my round tits hide
my nipples peek through
to the other side
Standing before you in
my white cotton panties
you put your hand in
the air and motion for
me to spin so you can
see my fanny
Admiring the way my
body moves how my
top clings to me as it
rubs on my tits
Bringing yourself into
me so your face is deep
in my neck you smell
me while your hand
finds it's way to my
moist slit
In between undies and
flesh your fingers crave
my dampness tapping
and twisting
I tilt my head back my
long blonde hair falls
cascading down my
back as you're lips do
the kissing
This vision of me is
so real you can feel
my hard nipples pressed
against your chest
You can feel my wet
heat in your hand as
you spread my nest
At the small of my back
your hand soothes me
your tender touch
moves me
Your eyes flutter open
to a lonely room where
shadows are cast
along the walls
With heavy breathing
and sweaty skin you
relax and squeeze
your balls
Another night dreaming
of me having me in
your vision
You curl your lips and
smile you know you
are driven
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Re: Visions Of Me
15th May 2013 12:32pm
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15th May 2013 1:22pm
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15th May 2013 1:23pm
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15th May 2013 12:45pm
me so your face is deep
in my neck you smell
me while your hand
finds it's way to my
moist slit
In between undies and
and
my hard nipples pressed
against your chest
You can feel my wet
heat in your hand as
you spread my nest
At the small of my back
are very erotic motion
love this line
in my neck you smell
me while your hand
finds it's way to my
moist slit
In between undies and
and
my hard nipples pressed
against your chest
You can feel my wet
heat in your hand as
you spread my nest
At the small of my back
are very erotic motion
love this line
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15th May 2013 1:24pm
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15th May 2013 12:54pm
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15th May 2013 1:25pm
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Anonymous
15th May 2013 2:53pm
nice flowing write tl
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15th May 2013 3:03pm
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Anonymous
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re: Re: Visions Of Me
15th May 2013 3:14pm
WOW!!Thank you SO much for the AMAZING comment!
I'm so happy you enjoyed it Amanecio,thanks for reading me! ;-)
I'm so happy you enjoyed it Amanecio,thanks for reading me! ;-)
Re: Visions Of Me
15th May 2013 4:22pm
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15th May 2013 4:33pm
My oh my!!!I can almost feel you!Hehee...
Another great comment, thank you Magic poemz! ;-)
Another great comment, thank you Magic poemz! ;-)
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15th May 2013 5:27pm
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15th May 2013 5:31pm
Re: Visions Of Me
15th May 2013 6:47pm
Very erotic and arousing write. You definately know how to paint a picture in my mind.
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15th May 2013 7:07pm
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15th May 2013 7:44pm
love the images as I read
beautiful and erotic.
"You can feel my wet
heat in your hand as
you spread my nest" Read that and my mind went in over drive;)
beautiful and erotic.
"You can feel my wet
heat in your hand as
you spread my nest" Read that and my mind went in over drive;)
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15th May 2013 8:01pm
Re: Visions Of Me
15th May 2013 9:43pm
Very nice flow, and erotic.
may you should be writing
penthouse letters,
thanks for sharing with us
may you should be writing
penthouse letters,
thanks for sharing with us
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re: Re: Visions Of Me
15th May 2013 10:16pm
You're welcome!Thanks for reading me!And thanks for
the great feedback poetbradley ;)
the great feedback poetbradley ;)
Re: Visions Of Me
16th May 2013 4:53am
you are somebody's wet dream, baby. you describe yourself in lusty lyrics...
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re: Re: Visions Of Me
16th May 2013 11:40am
Thank you kindly JohnFeddeler...much appreciated!
Thanks for reading me! ;-)
Thanks for reading me! ;-)