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Never Again
It's binding
It's suffocating
It's a lie
What once was
is no longer
Now pain sets
deep inside
getting far too
comfortable
Our flashbacks
are not the same
We hold anger
close but silently
I long to release
it
Letting you go
with it hoping
to break the
violence
I thought
marriage could
have been
I intended it
to be
Lasting this
long in
restraints
My fight is over
It's breakable
It's wasted
It's done
It's suffocating
It's a lie
What once was
is no longer
Now pain sets
deep inside
getting far too
comfortable
Our flashbacks
are not the same
We hold anger
close but silently
I long to release
it
Letting you go
with it hoping
to break the
violence
I thought
marriage could
have been
I intended it
to be
Lasting this
long in
restraints
My fight is over
It's breakable
It's wasted
It's done
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Re: Never Again
14th May 2013 7:00pm
The words paint a picture full of pain and agony... I know the feeling all to well.
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re: Re: Never Again
14th May 2013 7:19pm
Re: Never Again
14th May 2013 7:00pm
re: Re: Never Again
14th May 2013 7:22pm
It's painful...carry on...overcome!
Being happy is so important!
Thank you torednekone ;-)
Being happy is so important!
Thank you torednekone ;-)
Re: Never Again
14th May 2013 7:59pm
re: Re: Never Again
14th May 2013 8:29pm
Re: Never Again
Anonymous
14th May 2013 8:50pm
yep it does swirl with pain and resentment tl
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re: Re: Never Again
14th May 2013 8:56pm
Re: Never Again
14th May 2013 10:58pm
A sad reality for many and a difficult place to be and to escape from. I remember when I was there.
Profound write Tommielynn, nicely penned. :)
Profound write Tommielynn, nicely penned. :)
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re: Re: Never Again
14th May 2013 11:06pm
I hold onto hope...My lovely daughter will fall in love, I try to be positive for her, and for my boys...but they know it's a trick...I tell them love many...never make promises..marry none!Maybe not the best advice but it's honesty!
Thanks for reading :)
Thanks for reading :)
re: re: Re: Never Again
14th May 2013 11:10pm
It's the honesty that matters, two of my sons are grown up and one a teenager still with me, I advise wisely I hope, a mother can only do her best. :)
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re: re: re: Re: Never Again
14th May 2013 11:19pm
With my boys I expect them to be better men then most!
I have four boys and one stepson, two girls...
I'm raising a wonderful bunch of young adults!
Great communication, honesty, and lots of laughter and love!
A mothers job is never done!
I have four boys and one stepson, two girls...
I'm raising a wonderful bunch of young adults!
Great communication, honesty, and lots of laughter and love!
A mothers job is never done!
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14th May 2013 11:23pm
Re: Never Again
15th May 2013 2:50am
Alive she cried,
We can feel your pain,
awesome write,
the way you put your feeling into words truly Rocks!
We can feel your pain,
awesome write,
the way you put your feeling into words truly Rocks!
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15th May 2013 2:55am
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15th May 2013 1:19pm