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mark my broken words,
read my bleeding lips:
a broken jaw
only speaks
broken english.

Written by forgodsake

Published 13th May 2013

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Re: Add Vice

18th Jul 2013 00:43am

Good point - and you used your words wisely to make it!

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18th Jul 2013 6:11am

thanks for the feedback. It's always nice to know someone cares enough to read my stuff. thank you.

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