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Ahhh #2

I enter the bed
Asleep, she embraces me
Into her warmth

Please compare to Ahhh

Written by Skylark

Published 9th May 2013

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Re: Ahhh #2

9th May 2013 12:24pm

I would go with Ahhh...it contained a better image...nice!

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9th May 2013 8:38pm

Thanks for commenting, Lunaz

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