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Inspired...
He was stunned
by her beauty from day one,
she incinerated his soul
with a heat as hot as
the burning sun
unsurpassed
compassion
runs thru her
like a river run wild
as he layed cuddled
in her form of beauty
like a motherless child
indelibly infested
with fascination of
the taste of lips so sweet
projecting puckered images
to satiate a palate
as it runs on repeat...
he was stunned
by her beauty from day one,
because she incinerated his soul
with a heat
as hot as the burning sun...
by her beauty from day one,
she incinerated his soul
with a heat as hot as
the burning sun
unsurpassed
compassion
runs thru her
like a river run wild
as he layed cuddled
in her form of beauty
like a motherless child
indelibly infested
with fascination of
the taste of lips so sweet
projecting puckered images
to satiate a palate
as it runs on repeat...
he was stunned
by her beauty from day one,
because she incinerated his soul
with a heat
as hot as the burning sun...
Published 6th May 2013
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6th May 2013 3:22pm
oh I love this, so soft it's almost like your speaking in a whisper... beautiful :)
6th May 2013 4:18pm
6th May 2013 6:03pm
6th May 2013 6:32pm
Well I thank u there sir,
N I must admit I wrote it
as a result my daydreaming lol
guess that came I
Out huh? lol will be by ur way soon :)
N I must admit I wrote it
as a result my daydreaming lol
guess that came I
Out huh? lol will be by ur way soon :)
6th May 2013 8:38pm
"
the taste of lips so sweet
projecting puckered images
to satiate a palate
as it runs on repeat... "<--Beautiful! :)
the taste of lips so sweet
projecting puckered images
to satiate a palate
as it runs on repeat... "<--Beautiful! :)
6th May 2013 9:25pm
Anonymous
6th May 2013 10:30pm
Hard to read with eyes half closed and images dancing on the lids...
Love this.
Love this.
6th May 2013 10:36pm
Aaaawwww why so tired? :( lol but yea, happy you fought thru the sleepy eyes n managed a review! lol
Appreciate you :)
Appreciate you :)
7th May 2013 8:15am
7th May 2013 10:52am
Thank you! Why so sweet of this to say that
I realize that I've a long ways to go before I
hope to be really good BUT inspiring subjects
help me to hone my writing, n drawing skills
I appreciate you my dear... Soon I may just show u my
pottery skill too lol :)
I realize that I've a long ways to go before I
hope to be really good BUT inspiring subjects
help me to hone my writing, n drawing skills
I appreciate you my dear... Soon I may just show u my
pottery skill too lol :)
