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My Submission
submission is an act
relinquishing control
to another being
who guides your soul
there is only love
and pleasure to unfold
for myself it’s taken years
to erase deep hidden fears
my body is a playground
where minds have been reset
behind closed doors
in private do I present
for day time brings
a stressful role
of many hours
truth be told
so at evening rest
I do my best
give up control
and do as I’m told
my mind is free
and body quenched
and now is the time
to just be me
relinquishing control
to another being
who guides your soul
there is only love
and pleasure to unfold
for myself it’s taken years
to erase deep hidden fears
my body is a playground
where minds have been reset
behind closed doors
in private do I present
for day time brings
a stressful role
of many hours
truth be told
so at evening rest
I do my best
give up control
and do as I’m told
my mind is free
and body quenched
and now is the time
to just be me
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Re: My Submission
6th May 2013 1:20am
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6th May 2013 1:28am
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6th May 2013 4:06pm
It is and it's so hard to describe this life style to those with closed minds...
Re: My Submission
6th May 2013 2:02am
felt this line!!
for myself it’s taken years
to erase deep hidden fears
nice job!!!
it verse 3...behind closed doors (says closes)
for myself it’s taken years
to erase deep hidden fears
nice job!!!
it verse 3...behind closed doors (says closes)
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re: Re: My Submission
6th May 2013 2:09am
Re: My Submission
Anonymous
6th May 2013 5:10am
A quote I once found - and have always loved:
"Only the woman who has utterly surrendered and lost herself in her master's touch can truly be a woman."
This poem says it all.
"Only the woman who has utterly surrendered and lost herself in her master's touch can truly be a woman."
This poem says it all.
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6th May 2013 4:03pm
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Mar 2019 10:45pm
6th May 2013 6:44am
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Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:45am
7th May 2013 11:20am
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Re: My Submission
Anonymous
7th May 2013 3:41pm
Beautifully written! By giving over control we express trust in our lover to make us happy and satisfy our deep need for intimacy.
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