Mankind As Deities

The rhyme scheme fits the subject and your diction fits like a puzzle piece as well. I liked "As the catalyst to this god-like apparition
Illuminated humanity cast into perfection ". It makes me wonder if this is how you really see the world. Anyways Great job.

Thanks Tin Man. I'm glad you saw the significance between the rhyming verse and next two lines questioning it. I began writing this with the sole purpose of depicting the facade of an artist's infamy compared to what he is actually creating and how the consumer would take it in. I felt it hypocritical for me not to question the validity of my own work.

You're very welcome and I'm impressed by your skill and the level of thought you put into this piece. I thought you portrayed everything perfectly, please continue to write more I enjoy reading your work.

Thank you very much :). I'll be sure to read your work as well.

The poem, I think, would be stronger without that last couplet. JMHO, of course. There are some good lines here. I like "as the catalyst to this god-like apparition"; it makes me think of a malevolent ghost impersonating God. The closing quote is from Nirvana's "In Bloom", right? You should credit them beside it, though the quotation marks and separateness of the line from the poem itself suggest what it is.  
When I want to quote an artist I make it an epigraph, like this: http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/21462-boredom/ Thank you for the read!

Thanks for your input Heslopian. I think just having the first verse alone would definitely create a stronger tone to the poem, and I had originally intended to do so. Though, once I finished I got the vibe that it would come across as If I was stating a blatant truth , or that maybe I would come across as having my own sort of god-complex. It just felt it more sincere and intimate for me to include the two concluding questions.  
 
And, yeah you're correct. It is In Bloom by Nirvana. The song and more specifically those lyrics were the main inspiration for the piece. I thought I did give credit to the quote , but I seemed to have left that out :d. Thanks for noticing that.  
 
I've actually been reading a bunch of your poems on here recently and I always seem to get lost in thought while doing so. So, thank you too for the reading material .:) cheers.  

Interesting, I liked it. Great capture in few words, well done.

Enjoyed the depth of thought put into it.

Thanks Atakti. I got straight to the point with this one and it seems like all the cluttered repetition of my other work is enjoyably missed here.