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i';ll pay you tomorrowowowowowowowowoww
you are not even halfwayhomehomie
when we talk this war we all vets
mutiliation
meditation
kids
fuck yeah
like i give a shit
have'nt devoleped my swagger yet
introspection,anathema
let's see if i can spell it right
twice
introspection,anathema
nice
my balls sweat
never really seen without a p coat,hey cunt,
you could be a model line,
or a beer
a 5 o clock shadow
with the sunny sadistic yeh i'm drinkin again what the fuck of it disposition!!!!!???????
tomorrow i might wake up with two bitches from vegas
playin spades,or space invaders naked
i just love the smell of this cocaine shit
when we talk this war we all vets
mutiliation
meditation
kids
fuck yeah
like i give a shit
have'nt devoleped my swagger yet
introspection,anathema
let's see if i can spell it right
twice
introspection,anathema
nice
my balls sweat
never really seen without a p coat,hey cunt,
you could be a model line,
or a beer
a 5 o clock shadow
with the sunny sadistic yeh i'm drinkin again what the fuck of it disposition!!!!!???????
tomorrow i might wake up with two bitches from vegas
playin spades,or space invaders naked
i just love the smell of this cocaine shit
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Re: i';ll pay you tomorrowowowowowowowowoww
30th Apr 2013 7:53am
*chuckles*
Upbeat huh ?
Mr. Rot
If Hunter S wrote poetry I have a strange feeling he would have sounded like you, and you make me love the idea of "gonzo" poets. :)
Upbeat huh ?
Mr. Rot
If Hunter S wrote poetry I have a strange feeling he would have sounded like you, and you make me love the idea of "gonzo" poets. :)
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re: Re: i';ll pay you tomorrowowowowowowowowoww
30th Apr 2013 6:54pm
thank you mam....i thought it was pretty upbeat... not my usual woe is me,self hatred nonsense....i would have loved to hang with hunter tho. sean penn said that they partied hard........
thanx miss maggie
thanx miss maggie
Re: i';ll pay you tomorrowowowowowowowowoww
Anonymous
30th Apr 2013 8:53am
Yep circular Jr...love in retrograde
strider
strider
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30th Apr 2013 7:41pm
Re: i';ll pay you tomorrowowowowowowowowoww
Anonymous
30th Apr 2013 10:06pm
Wow, this is not what I was expecting. I really liked how fresh this poem was. Great job.
JaimeBun
JaimeBun
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re: Re: i';ll pay you tomorrowowowowowowowowoww
1st May 2013 3:56am
Re: i';ll pay you tomorrowowowowowowowowoww
30th Apr 2013 10:44pm
"introspection,anathema
let's see if i can spell it right
twice
introspection,anathema
nice"
Yeah, nice. *grin* that humor of yours...
let's see if i can spell it right
twice
introspection,anathema
nice"
Yeah, nice. *grin* that humor of yours...
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re: Re: i';ll pay you tomorrowowowowowowowowoww
1st May 2013 3:57am
Re: i';ll pay you tomorrowowowowowowowowoww
1st May 2013 3:20am
John, I just love the way the sparks just fly unbridled from your pen like melodic feedback screaming from your guitar. Awesome as always !
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1st May 2013 3:58am
Re: i';ll pay you tomorrowowowowowowowowoww
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1st May 2013 5:32pm
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1st May 2013 5:53pm
Re: i';ll pay you tomorrowowowowowowowowoww
3rd May 2013 11:40pm
Coke is shit, in my experience. But your stuff is growing on me. But don't do crack, smack or acid. They're the ones that kill you, or worse...you'll just have to believe me. Or not. It's okay. We can negotiate.
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Re: i';ll pay you tomorrowowowowowowowowoww
3rd May 2013 11:41pm
Sorry for possible pretentiousness in previous post, I'm pissed on piss-liquor.
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3rd May 2013 11:42pm