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Love a Good Storm
Raging skies tonight
Brought raw hunger
To storms that surged within
Bodies creating shapes as the
Cloud formation billowed outside
Intensity of the storm increased
With our lovemaking
Moans and groans mimicking the
Rumble in the distance
Screams unheard through the claps of thunder
Finishing together as the
Storm quieted and moved on
Brought raw hunger
To storms that surged within
Bodies creating shapes as the
Cloud formation billowed outside
Intensity of the storm increased
With our lovemaking
Moans and groans mimicking the
Rumble in the distance
Screams unheard through the claps of thunder
Finishing together as the
Storm quieted and moved on
Published 18th Apr 2013
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18th Apr 2013 3:35pm
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19th Apr 2013 2:42pm
18th Apr 2013 4:48pm
I like your symbolism... allows the reader to interpret at his our her own discretion
19th Apr 2013 2:43pm
18th Apr 2013 10:51pm
Wow!!! I wrote a poem about a storm bringing hunger with it. I just now found yours. That's wild. Here's mine http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/101983-a-storm-is-coming/
Beware, very dark and sexually explicit though. Love your poem by the way.
Beware, very dark and sexually explicit though. Love your poem by the way.
22nd Apr 2013 00:01am
