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haiku 3
thinking please no more
almost like rape you push away -
but he is stronger
his stench on your skin
you feel sick and so dirty -
he hits you again
crying won't help you
it'll only encourage -
so stick to silence
sensuous moaning [/font][/font]
deep movement of emotions -
left in an alley
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Published 7th Oct 2010
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27th Oct 2010 5:57pm
i can't write haiku's lol :D
a painfully dark rape sequence
great writing and perfect structure
keep writing forever!
xxxx
a painfully dark rape sequence
great writing and perfect structure
keep writing forever!
xxxx
28th Oct 2010 1:06pm
thank you :)
and i'm sure if you give it a go you could easily write a haiku :)
xx
