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Let Down
You beg
You plead
Asking for forgiveness
Like a child
You'd get on your knees
And i shall ask
Why should I?
Your acts are getting old
My expectations drop
My hope fades
For you
I do not ask for much
And yet you continue to disappoint me
Why can't you?
There is no excuses
No sympathy
And I'll live through it
Because you are my let down.
You plead
Asking for forgiveness
Like a child
You'd get on your knees
And i shall ask
Why should I?
Your acts are getting old
My expectations drop
My hope fades
For you
I do not ask for much
And yet you continue to disappoint me
Why can't you?
There is no excuses
No sympathy
And I'll live through it
Because you are my let down.
Published 7th Oct 2010
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7th Oct 2010 3:13am
i can tell from this poem that you are very angry this is what a poem should reveal the rage, love, lust, need, want, hope, joy, happiness, sorrow, Ect, of what you feel this was a magnificent poem but rather short and to the point
