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The One
He was the one, loved me for who I was
Never got mad
I could mold him,he was putty in my hand
He was the one, I could call in the night
Always be by my side
Spoke soft and kind every time
He was the one, opened the door for me
Held my hand
Told me I was sexy and beautiful
He was the one,bought me a diamond ring
Asked me to marry him
I think I ruined him forever
He was the one, perfect for me in every way
He was the one, the one that got away
I see the one every now and again
We say hello, smile, I think what could have been
He is the one, for someone else
He is the one, I should have held onto myself
Never got mad
I could mold him,he was putty in my hand
He was the one, I could call in the night
Always be by my side
Spoke soft and kind every time
He was the one, opened the door for me
Held my hand
Told me I was sexy and beautiful
He was the one,bought me a diamond ring
Asked me to marry him
I think I ruined him forever
He was the one, perfect for me in every way
He was the one, the one that got away
I see the one every now and again
We say hello, smile, I think what could have been
He is the one, for someone else
He is the one, I should have held onto myself
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Re: The One
16th Apr 2013 7:22pm
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16th Apr 2013 7:29pm
Regrets indeed :( missed opportunity!
Thanks for reading Magdalena and the nice comment!
Thanks for reading Magdalena and the nice comment!
Re: The One
16th Apr 2013 8:08pm
Great reflection on lost love. I think everyone has someone that makes them think, "What if...?"
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16th Apr 2013 9:13pm
Re: The One
16th Apr 2013 8:14pm
these things happen in life we have regrets sad for you hope you are ok good write
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16th Apr 2013 9:15pm
Thank you glen, it was awhile ago..I'm great!But I do still wonder!Thanks for reading and your kind words!
Re: The One
16th Apr 2013 9:00pm
Hauntingly beautiful; the story of my like in many ways. Why must life mock our pain so? Yes, people make mistakes, but buying the wrong paint color is not the same thing as losing someone you love indefinitely. At that point, it becomes eternal torment. And all of the puppies and poetry in the world cannot offset that loss. And so we can only do what is left: cope, wait, and hope for a brigher day, that may or may not come.
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16th Apr 2013 9:18pm
My dear lovegood,
I completely agree...I take blame for not being by his side but I do hope for a brighter day!Your words mean alot..thank you very much!
I completely agree...I take blame for not being by his side but I do hope for a brighter day!Your words mean alot..thank you very much!
Re: The One
16th Apr 2013 10:23pm
what the past taught you shapes you, what your future holds molds you, forget the past but don't ever forget what it taught you. 1 door closes but another opens. We Live, We Love, & We Rise. Don't ever forget that Tommie, you are not alone & you never will be :) Blessed Be
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16th Apr 2013 10:35pm
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Anonymous
17th Apr 2013 1:03am
cycles indeed tl... they never end
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17th Apr 2013 1:12am