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I Wish It Would Rain
I wish it would rain, warm drops of rain
The kind of rain I want to dance in
Splash in mud puddles barefoot so
I can feel the warm ground under me
The kind of rain I crave a wet faced kiss in
Standing soaking wet bodies touching
as the rain pours over our faces
The kind of rain that we can make love in
I wish it would rain, warm drops of rain
The kind of rain I want to dance in
Splash in mud puddles barefoot so
I can feel the warm ground under me
The kind of rain I crave a wet faced kiss in
Standing soaking wet bodies touching
as the rain pours over our faces
The kind of rain that we can make love in
I wish it would rain, warm drops of rain
Published 9th Apr 2013
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9th Apr 2013 11:09pm
The Rain is my greatest weather, when i was born i listened to raindrops taping against the window of Virginia Tech Hospital & it was like Angels playing harps
9th Apr 2013 11:19pm
9th Apr 2013 11:46pm
Anonymous
9th Apr 2013 11:15pm
This is amazing. As a rain lover myself I can appreciate it! I thought a few moments were a little typical for poetry but the way you present it and proceed forgets that! Well done.
9th Apr 2013 11:18pm
Anonymous
10th Apr 2013 3:21am
Sweet write tl...strider
10th Apr 2013 3:51pm
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30th May 2013 4:55pm
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