Submissions by DeeperThanDark (Nicky)
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poet Introduction
I have been writing poetry for about 2 years, and I hope on here I might get a little bit of feedback on what everyone thinks of my poetry. Thankyou, -Nicole
SELF POEM
Published
24th Apr 2012 1:11am
24th Apr 2012 1:11am
Selfish >me< !?
I am greedy
Unbelievably needy
I take up time
So much that it should be a crime
It would be better off
if I was dead
And now that, that's known...
There's nothing else to be said.
Unbelievably needy
I take up time
So much that it should be a crime
It would be better off
if I was dead
And now that, that's known...
There's nothing else to be said.
768 reads
2 Comments
ANGER POEM
Published
23rd Apr 2012 6:30pm
23rd Apr 2012 6:30pm
Wish I could come up with a poem! >.<
I have no idea for a poem
its like every idea I had was stolen!
I never thought writers block
was so annoying!
i thought my idea was on lock!
Something i wouldn't forget
I had every word planned out and set
and now its gone, just like that!
Rhyming words and a structure, I lack!
This is so irritating!
Not to mention frustrating!
I'm banging my head against the wall
But nothing's coming! Nothing at all!
Damnit!
I'm about to throw a fucking fit!
Grrr...guess I'll just sit around till
something comes to mind ...
its like every idea I had was stolen!
I never thought writers block
was so annoying!
i thought my idea was on lock!
Something i wouldn't forget
I had every word planned out and set
and now its gone, just like that!
Rhyming words and a structure, I lack!
This is so irritating!
Not to mention frustrating!
I'm banging my head against the wall
But nothing's coming! Nothing at all!
Damnit!
I'm about to throw a fucking fit!
Grrr...guess I'll just sit around till
something comes to mind ...
694 reads
2 Comments
UPBEAT INSPIRATIONAL POEM
Published
23rd Apr 2012 6:40am
23rd Apr 2012 6:40am
_______The Path Less Traveled By _________
She asked me to hold on for her
She told me she would hold on for me
I'm glad that she knows I love her
And I know she loves me
And together we will take this road
the one less traveled by
and they say there's hope
and we may not see it
but they've done nothing
to make us not trust
so this is a risk we'll take
like so many others
but this time what comes out of it is a gamble
She told me she would hold on for me
I'm glad that she knows I love her
And I know she loves me
And together we will take this road
the one less traveled by
and they say there's hope
and we may not see it
but they've done nothing
to make us not trust
so this is a risk we'll take
like so many others
but this time what comes out of it is a gamble
592 reads
0 Comments
LOVE POEM
Published
23rd Apr 2012 6:34am
23rd Apr 2012 6:34am
!~She Will Make It~!
My sister is going off tomorrow
I can see it in her eyes
She's feeling sorrowful
She doesn't want to go
to that hospital
but she refuses to let it show
I wish as she does
that she could stay
but her life would be the price she'd pay
this eating disorder is hurting her
and this place she is going will help
I'm sure
But I'm sad that she doesn't want to go
And healing does come slow
But she does want help
and this is the way to do it
and for now her flame
will remain lit
I can see it in her eyes
She's feeling sorrowful
She doesn't want to go
to that hospital
but she refuses to let it show
I wish as she does
that she could stay
but her life would be the price she'd pay
this eating disorder is hurting her
and this place she is going will help
I'm sure
But I'm sad that she doesn't want to go
And healing does come slow
But she does want help
and this is the way to do it
and for now her flame
will remain lit
671 reads
2 Comments
DARK POEM
Published
22nd Apr 2012 8:34pm
22nd Apr 2012 8:34pm
~She is Holding On~
She is bleeding right this second
The sad thing is, this time it isnt a cut
They've hidden everything in her house
But sadly they can't take away her nails
She digs her nails into her skin
and that's where the puncture wounds begin
It burns her
like a mother fucker
and sadly she is stuck there
She is finding help
And hopefully this will let
her have atleast a little hope again...
The sad thing is, this time it isnt a cut
They've hidden everything in her house
But sadly they can't take away her nails
She digs her nails into her skin
and that's where the puncture wounds begin
It burns her
like a mother fucker
and sadly she is stuck there
She is finding help
And hopefully this will let
her have atleast a little hope again...
629 reads
2 Comments
SELF POEM
Published
22nd Apr 2012 8:01pm
22nd Apr 2012 8:01pm
Maybe...Just Maybe
Bipolar Disorder
Post Traumatic Stress Disorder Depresssion
Obsessive Compulsive Disorder
Self Esteem
Why does all of this have to happen to me?
They say all girls say they're ugly
They say everyone gets sad.
But they DON'T KNOW.
In my world, all is cold.
Looking in the mirror
brings more than tears.
Being alone
makes my heart want to turn to stone
This pain...
it runs through my veins
like ice
and its more than being stuck in its vice
maybe....just...
Post Traumatic Stress Disorder Depresssion
Obsessive Compulsive Disorder
Self Esteem
Why does all of this have to happen to me?
They say all girls say they're ugly
They say everyone gets sad.
But they DON'T KNOW.
In my world, all is cold.
Looking in the mirror
brings more than tears.
Being alone
makes my heart want to turn to stone
This pain...
it runs through my veins
like ice
and its more than being stuck in its vice
maybe....just...
786 reads
6 Comments
OBSERVATIONAL POEM
Published
22nd Apr 2012 4:33am
22nd Apr 2012 4:33am
*The woman in her*
Why can't women really be who they are?
They are judged and shunned and left with invisible scars
Us women, we are fragile, broken from expectations
It shouldn't take a revelation
for people to know
The beauty inside of a woman is what should show
There's dark all around us
why can't someone love the heart of the woman, the part that should glow
Why is her light tainted
Why is her face painted
Leave her face bare
Her true side to be shared
take her hand
and show her the love
that she never expected
but from above
They are judged and shunned and left with invisible scars
Us women, we are fragile, broken from expectations
It shouldn't take a revelation
for people to know
The beauty inside of a woman is what should show
There's dark all around us
why can't someone love the heart of the woman, the part that should glow
Why is her light tainted
Why is her face painted
Leave her face bare
Her true side to be shared
take her hand
and show her the love
that she never expected
but from above
769 reads
10 Comments
UPBEAT INSPIRATIONAL POEM
Published
22nd Apr 2012 4:17am
22nd Apr 2012 4:17am
*_____'s Poem*
I met a beautiful woman today
with words of hope that she would say
And she gave me reason to believe
that I have been deceived
there's a chance that there's
something more than pain in life
Perhaps there is something
to be gained from my strife
I can't say I don't have my doubts
is it possible something was left out?
I trust her now, and I know she is here for me
But one thing i hope I can make her see...
I AM there for her
And with our family's support i hope she can find her cure
We all love her, this entire family ...
with words of hope that she would say
And she gave me reason to believe
that I have been deceived
there's a chance that there's
something more than pain in life
Perhaps there is something
to be gained from my strife
I can't say I don't have my doubts
is it possible something was left out?
I trust her now, and I know she is here for me
But one thing i hope I can make her see...
I AM there for her
And with our family's support i hope she can find her cure
We all love her, this entire family ...
779 reads
4 Comments
DARK POEM
Published
21st Apr 2012 7:21pm
21st Apr 2012 7:21pm
~...The young girl...~
A small
A beautiful girl
so frail
She was broken apart
when daddy was sent to jail
From daddy there was no more kisses or hugs
And then mommy began
her descent into drugs
Her brother from then on
wasn't seen or heard from again
and then the young girl lost her closest friend
'that girl is no good' 'she comes from a bad family'
but no one could see the girl had no control over this catastrophe
The sweet innocent little girl then was left all alone
And now she lies buried in dirt
beneath a grave marked...
A beautiful girl
so frail
She was broken apart
when daddy was sent to jail
From daddy there was no more kisses or hugs
And then mommy began
her descent into drugs
Her brother from then on
wasn't seen or heard from again
and then the young girl lost her closest friend
'that girl is no good' 'she comes from a bad family'
but no one could see the girl had no control over this catastrophe
The sweet innocent little girl then was left all alone
And now she lies buried in dirt
beneath a grave marked...
813 reads
8 Comments
DARK POEM
Published
21st Apr 2012 7:11pm
21st Apr 2012 7:11pm
What happened to sweet little Nicole? -my cousin
What happened to the sweet little Nicole, I used to know?
Sweet little Nicole died.
How?
She died when her mother turned her back on her
She died when her brother told her numerous times
that she was fat and he wanted her dead
She died when her father told her she never did anything right
she died when someone in her family sexually abused her
she died when she was sexually abused yet again by a guy
at a daycare center.
She died and was reborn when they forced her into a psychiatric
hospital.
She was reborn...a monster.
...
Sweet little Nicole died.
How?
She died when her mother turned her back on her
She died when her brother told her numerous times
that she was fat and he wanted her dead
She died when her father told her she never did anything right
she died when someone in her family sexually abused her
she died when she was sexually abused yet again by a guy
at a daycare center.
She died and was reborn when they forced her into a psychiatric
hospital.
She was reborn...a monster.
...
744 reads
6 Comments
DARK POEM
Published
21st Apr 2012 1:38am
21st Apr 2012 1:38am
...To Die Alone!
To look up into nothingness
To fight to accomplish nothing
To see nothing but death ahead
No more future
To die alone
To feel regret
To wish for a difference
To be so dark as to wish
it upon someone else
To know your days are limited
To take your final, lonely breath
Welcome to Hell.
To Die Alone.
To fight to accomplish nothing
To see nothing but death ahead
No more future
To die alone
To feel regret
To wish for a difference
To be so dark as to wish
it upon someone else
To know your days are limited
To take your final, lonely breath
Welcome to Hell.
To Die Alone.
655 reads
3 Comments
DARK POEM
Published
21st Apr 2012 1:34am
21st Apr 2012 1:34am
x:.Silent.:x
There is so much to hear
so little to repeat
Be silent as they
listen happily
to the sound of your defeat
so little to repeat
Be silent as they
listen happily
to the sound of your defeat
716 reads
6 Comments
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