Submissions by Deborahlee3313 (poetry in oceans)
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poet Introduction
been writing for years but only just started to write erotic poems in 2013. I am enjoying the experience immensely! check out my work.
Email Ecstasy (collaboration with TORNADO)
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Dear Daddy (I wrote this as a gift to my daddy a few years back)
**re-dedicated to my dad, who I just lost this St. Patrick's day...I love you daddy***
When I was daddy's little girl
you were my hero then
and every time I see you now
I remember that again
A fathers love is special
and I knew it from the start
dear daddy your the first man
who I loved with all my heart
I think back on the things we've done
and the places that we'd go
like going to the races
or out to a wrestling show
No one can pick their parents
we all know that this is true
but if I got to...
When I was daddy's little girl
you were my hero then
and every time I see you now
I remember that again
A fathers love is special
and I knew it from the start
dear daddy your the first man
who I loved with all my heart
I think back on the things we've done
and the places that we'd go
like going to the races
or out to a wrestling show
No one can pick their parents
we all know that this is true
but if I got to...
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I Hear Your Getting Married (for my cousin Anna)
I hear your getting married
that you'll celebrate your love
I wish you joy and happiness
life filled with Blessings from Above
Try not to sweat the little things
and to keep an open mind
communicate at all times
be understanding and be kind
I hear your getting married
to your lover and your friend
one who'll stand beside you
from beginning til the end
My wish for you is simple
as you live from day to day
that each moment bring you closer
fill your lives in every way
I hear your getting married
that you'll...
that you'll celebrate your love
I wish you joy and happiness
life filled with Blessings from Above
Try not to sweat the little things
and to keep an open mind
communicate at all times
be understanding and be kind
I hear your getting married
to your lover and your friend
one who'll stand beside you
from beginning til the end
My wish for you is simple
as you live from day to day
that each moment bring you closer
fill your lives in every way
I hear your getting married
that you'll...
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A Toast
An amazing carnal feast you did offer
a beautiful submission now almost complete
I shall drink to my own immortality
Here's to you as you die at my feet
Cheers...
a beautiful submission now almost complete
I shall drink to my own immortality
Here's to you as you die at my feet
Cheers...
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Beneath my Robe
Now miss "Riding Hood" I am not
more like the wolf, I'd nibble on your lobe
enticing you with my naughty seduction
alluring you to get...beneath my robe
My lethal charm has a magnetic pull
to lore you in for some carnal delights
beneath my robe you will find me wanton
I'll bewitch you then ride you all night
We can ravish each other repeatedly
beneath my robe my arousal flows free
come taste of my ominous offering
please come take this robe off of me
Be mischievous with me and do it often
you, I will kiss and will lick and...
more like the wolf, I'd nibble on your lobe
enticing you with my naughty seduction
alluring you to get...beneath my robe
My lethal charm has a magnetic pull
to lore you in for some carnal delights
beneath my robe you will find me wanton
I'll bewitch you then ride you all night
We can ravish each other repeatedly
beneath my robe my arousal flows free
come taste of my ominous offering
please come take this robe off of me
Be mischievous with me and do it often
you, I will kiss and will lick and...
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Some Like it Hot
They say some like it hot, well I am smoking
ready for you morning, noon and night
when I finish with the rules I will have broken
I will show you all the things that I do right
Now I can be so good, but the devil, she is in me
and I bet you never knew she was a girl
they say some like it hot, well I am smoking
come on over baby, take me for a whirl
***sending out a lil nod to my fellow poet "lilreddevil"
as her profile pic would also go well with this one***
stay tuned...
ready for you morning, noon and night
when I finish with the rules I will have broken
I will show you all the things that I do right
Now I can be so good, but the devil, she is in me
and I bet you never knew she was a girl
they say some like it hot, well I am smoking
come on over baby, take me for a whirl
***sending out a lil nod to my fellow poet "lilreddevil"
as her profile pic would also go well with this one***
stay tuned...
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I Watched...
I watched, just couldn't look away
tried and tried but I failed
the carnal sight before me now
could get some people jailed
I listened to the sounds they made
saw things she did to him
he grabbed her, threw her to the ground
and then he filled her to the brim
Up and down and in and out
there was moaning, panting and screaming
I watched, just couldn't look away
my own juices started streaming
His head dipped to taste of her
I couldn't breathe, I held my breath
a gasp escaped my lips, they heard
they were startled half...
tried and tried but I failed
the carnal sight before me now
could get some people jailed
I listened to the sounds they made
saw things she did to him
he grabbed her, threw her to the ground
and then he filled her to the brim
Up and down and in and out
there was moaning, panting and screaming
I watched, just couldn't look away
my own juices started streaming
His head dipped to taste of her
I couldn't breathe, I held my breath
a gasp escaped my lips, they heard
they were startled half...
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Forbidden Fruit
No, the grass may not be greener
on the other side of town
and you can face great temptation
with forbidden fruit around
Look, but do not touch they say
a golden rule you should not break
even if that fruit taste sweeter
that bite isn't yours to take
Lust can build your fantasies
and strain your self control
you struggle to fight temptation
as it burns into your soul
You realize you've lost the fight
it's relentless pull grabs hold
you give in to desires touch
the forbidden can make you bold
on the other side of town
and you can face great temptation
with forbidden fruit around
Look, but do not touch they say
a golden rule you should not break
even if that fruit taste sweeter
that bite isn't yours to take
Lust can build your fantasies
and strain your self control
you struggle to fight temptation
as it burns into your soul
You realize you've lost the fight
it's relentless pull grabs hold
you give in to desires touch
the forbidden can make you bold
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She answers...His Questionnaire ( a compilation with torednekone)
I was challenged by torednekone to give some poetic answers to his Questionnaire...so here's what we've got!!
Questions bombard my every waking moment.
let me answer you so you do not lay awake
How am I going to touch you and where will I caress?
touch me with passion, caress me where I quake
What place will we be in?
oh babe, take me EVERY PLACE!
Do you like the lights on or off?
I like it any way, in any space
How much time will we have?
since tomorrow never comes, until then
Do I undress you, or do I watch you...
Questions bombard my every waking moment.
let me answer you so you do not lay awake
How am I going to touch you and where will I caress?
touch me with passion, caress me where I quake
What place will we be in?
oh babe, take me EVERY PLACE!
Do you like the lights on or off?
I like it any way, in any space
How much time will we have?
since tomorrow never comes, until then
Do I undress you, or do I watch you...
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A Letter From Above
I do know that you'll miss me
that you can not understand
why I was taken from you
stolen right out from your hand
Just please try to remember
when you can not see me there
my love, I am still with you
and for you, I'll always care
Feel me in the gentle breeze
like a caress upon your face
hear me whisper in the wind
"in my heart you hold a place"
I'll be there when you think of me
watching you from my cloud Above
as I sit up here protecting you
I'll be sending down my love
that you can not understand
why I was taken from you
stolen right out from your hand
Just please try to remember
when you can not see me there
my love, I am still with you
and for you, I'll always care
Feel me in the gentle breeze
like a caress upon your face
hear me whisper in the wind
"in my heart you hold a place"
I'll be there when you think of me
watching you from my cloud Above
as I sit up here protecting you
I'll be sending down my love
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I vs You
I bet the long shot
you take the sure thing
I like to dance
you like to sing
I keep my things neat
you are a big slob
I'd give the shirt, off my back
you'd say "go get a job"
I am small
you are bigger
I brush things off
you pull the trigger
I gaze at the moon
you worship the sun
I like intensity
you like it fun
I like it rough
you take it easy
I like to sail
you get too queasy
I reach for your hand
you let me fall
I want, what is mine
you...
you take the sure thing
I like to dance
you like to sing
I keep my things neat
you are a big slob
I'd give the shirt, off my back
you'd say "go get a job"
I am small
you are bigger
I brush things off
you pull the trigger
I gaze at the moon
you worship the sun
I like intensity
you like it fun
I like it rough
you take it easy
I like to sail
you get too queasy
I reach for your hand
you let me fall
I want, what is mine
you...
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MY WHAT IF...AND HIS HEARTFELT RESPONSE
My What If...
As I huddle here, I contemplate days gone by
thoughts wander to youthful kisses left behind
what If I told you that you're my what if
that fantasies of you have haunted my mind
Drawn together during an age of innocence
shared tender kisses and hugging with ease
what if I told you that you're my what if
would you think I was just being a tease
Like superman, you traveled the world
for "truth, justice and the American way"
what if I told you that you're my what if
as you went off, I wished you would...
As I huddle here, I contemplate days gone by
thoughts wander to youthful kisses left behind
what If I told you that you're my what if
that fantasies of you have haunted my mind
Drawn together during an age of innocence
shared tender kisses and hugging with ease
what if I told you that you're my what if
would you think I was just being a tease
Like superman, you traveled the world
for "truth, justice and the American way"
what if I told you that you're my what if
as you went off, I wished you would...
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