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TLIFD (Rope)
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zinger
Fire of Insight
United States
Joined 30th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 170

ya'll i've been quite entertained
all you fuckers thinking you're the shit
when all you're doing is tossing up bricks
making yourself look stupid
just remember who's pulling the strings
call me the puppet master
each and everyone of yous my little bitch
at the end of this shit
i call the shots
stop thinking you hot
you'll never take the top spot
i hold that shit down
laughing at you fuckers still on the ground
wishing you could be me
but i'm too fast
you bitches can't even see me

TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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Joined 17th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 232

You all lame
That's me in that smoke train
Yall in my lane
Brick to the neck and in the lake
You ant even in a way
Take a step back
See the big picture ,there's so much skill you lack
But it figures ,you to narrow minded
You don't make sense ,you senseless
These punchlines hit you words senseless
You can tell by my words ,that I know hardship
That's why my lyrics go the hardest
I'm them highly flameable carpets
And with this flame ,I levatate and can't stop it
So out your league ,in parrelal cosmics
And my shit ,atomic
Realisticly speaking
I'm a radio active becan
Letting gamatical inspiration
Sizzling like frying bacan
And you taught you were to old for a beating

Satyr
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 20th Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 59

Lemme try to immerse myself in the verses on your breath
Cuz Satyr's here to leave a curse on those who wish death
I've been gone too long from this game you call "rap"
But what I've got to spit can cause you to collapse

Deep in the darkest parts ov my Hell
Lies a Necropolis filled with the rage ov the Felled
With broken dreams and molted wings
Where the sins ov the Fallen made them like kings

Welcome to my abyss, an unclearly severe city ov deceit
The gods forbid you exist here with your self-pity and greed
As I sit on my throne, made from carnage and bone
I'm the leader ov those pirate hordes
Whose laws and lives are on their swords
In other words...

The legions I command would rather take their lives for me
They'll be sent to slather and smother your brothers and mother
One after another, every other, til you go madder and suffer
Their cadavers I'll recover for some sweet meat snacks
Strips ov flesh carved right from their backs
Stacks ov their bones stuffed in burlap sacks
Using their corpses to make paraffin wax

Murder and death ain't nothing concerned with
Cannibalism
Anatomical vandalism
The diabolical mannerism
Ov an individual so peculiar
Someone who may seem oddly unfamiliar
A loser, a ruler, no future, a failure

This shit in my realm, not even the tip
Ov the iceberg fucker, I just had to commit
Now I'll admit I've let things slip
About my thoughts and wicked intents
So as for this taste, you may be welcome
To the darker side ov this venomous spectrum
Where madness and bedlam beckon rebellion

TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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Joined 17th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 232

Oh please tell me ,you were joking
That shit you wrote ,not worth reading
Hell,I know that well
All that has life is all that can tell
That my writes inspire people to rebel
Against ,what is against my will
Cannibal
I do more damage still  
And I'm king until
What ceases to be is real
I exile fakes to the metaphysical


poet Anonymous

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TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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Forum Posts: 232

Riky you dumb shit I'm the one Who you suppose to dis
Read the rules Fool
Or was that really fear I'm smelling of you

:p

poet Anonymous

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TLIFD
Rope
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Anonymous said:<< post removed >>

Lol I get you
Taking things personal
Zingers lines are shit
We all know this
But I was hoping ,somebody would go at me
Besides zinger..lol


poet Anonymous

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Irunuhmuck
NastyAsViruz
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 18th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 36

I got these evil thoughts n' got these evil plots of
cutting' N' gutting' uh hole N' uh spot N' tying
your intestines in sick double knots taking your last
breath your last words were STOP! I laugh N' I
mock N' reply I CANNOT! Making sure your dead to
tha dome widd my glock pull tha trigger N' one
shot I'm sick N' deranged I'm sick N' distraught I'll
leave your body there to decay N' to rot N' in
about an hour I'll forget N' forgot that it was your
body that I sliced N' chopped cuz your uh
chatterbox & I been sick since uh liddol kid on
playground kickin' rocks barring kids alive in the
Fuckinq sandbox ....

PS......yes my grammar sucks lol all well...

TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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Joined 17th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 232

Anonymous said:<< post removed >>

you mean the person above you
lol

poet Anonymous

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Jakki
Lost Thinker
Australia
Joined 20th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 13

You flow like the skin off a week old gravy
your rhymes just as chunky, they're slow paced and lazy
You're forcing out stabs and every Tom, Dick and Shichibukai
that people look at you like "Is that that Elias Abuelazam guy?"
It's sickening, hold up now my pace is quickening
Arrowroot rhymes to shorten up this thickening
swing a couple low blows they'll sure as hell be crippling
so get the umpire ready with the towel and bell - dingaling
You're sloppy, skunk breath? please kid go back to school
Better yet, hop on the bus and lemme teach you


TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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Forum Posts: 232

I destroyed and birthed creatures on that same heath
He who thinks they can take me
Beware thee
Cause you doing this like its your only purpose
Cant admit the fact you purposeless
Peek in ,nothingness
Thats why ,you switch trends like emotions
In hopes not to remain faceless
Implosion ,for deeming these words not potent
Im uncommon like individual taught
Shichibukai means war lord
Now im just saulghtering all yall
Forgeting the past
Still scars for the present

poet Anonymous

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