Poetry competition CLOSED 26th November 2013 3:07pm
WINNER
HadesRising
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RUNNERS-UP: PsychicApocalypse and Intricate_B

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deadwolf
Fire of Insight
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Joined 28th Jan 2013
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Alright, is a bit of a challenge, as some of this is in Spanish in one of these, I know, don’t ALL hate me hehehe… But, some out there can do it, an much better than me, as I am a bit rusty… o.0

http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/94167-death-beckons/

http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/123510-house-of-silence-and-misery/

http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/120764-fear-of-love/



Smoogej1s
Taylor
Fire of Insight
United States 16awards
Joined 15th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 267

Thanks for the wonderful submission Darkerhalf!

And.. Thanks for offering up some poems for us Deadwolf.

I don't know how I'm ever going to be able to decide on a winner for this one, Some really wonderful pieces here, thanks to everyone who has participated to far!

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
United States 34awards
Joined 8th June 2013
Forum Posts: 1625

ok, I've decided to rewrite Deadwolf's Death Beckons. I hope I gave it justice, buddy. I give you...

THE REAPER WAITS

I can hear you all
As you struggle for
One more breath.
That, I give to you
As a homecoming gift
For the last breath
Is so much sweeter.

As soon as you're born
You begin to die.
That makes you mine
To do with as I please.
Your time on Earth
Are my good graces.

When the time runs out
You feel hope die,
The face of Death
Leads only to despair.
Skeletal hands
Guides to depression.

There can be nothing,
Oblivion,
Shadows descend,
Upon your deathly shroud.
The Reaper waits
To take you away.


Smoogej1s
Taylor
Fire of Insight
United States 16awards
Joined 15th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 267

Thanks for the submission Hades! :)

deadwolf
Fire of Insight
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Joined 28th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 198

Man Hades, you made my song your Bitch, an made it your own man, hehehe... VERY WELL Done my friend, you impressed the hell out o' me man, I give you much respect, you did very well in my eyes... The Reaper,
"As soon as you're born
You begin to die.
That makes you mine
To do with as I please.
Your time on Earth
Are my good graces."
Man, Great words here, I like them very much, its what I hear in my head The Reaper sayin also, an you are right, the Last breath is the sweetest as the first cut is the deepest, Great talent there my friend, writin from the view of the reaper, oh I like that a lot Brother... pen on man, pen on...

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
United States 34awards
Joined 8th June 2013
Forum Posts: 1625

thank you for giving me the material to work with, brother.

Smoogej1s
Taylor
Fire of Insight
United States 16awards
Joined 15th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 267

This is going to be absolutely impossible to judge.. so many great entries! Thanks to everyone who entered, I'll have a decision on the winner, and runners-up within the next few days!!

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
United States 34awards
Joined 8th June 2013
Forum Posts: 1625

holy hell, I did not expect to win this. Thank you so much. Congrats Darker and Intricate_B. There was so absolute true gems here (before and after)and I had a blast participating in this comp. Thanks for hosting this Smoogej.

PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
Belize 30awards
Joined 5th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 1483

Wow!! Congratz HadesRising... I can definitely say that this was your win.
I absolutely loved all your entries.

*patting myself on the back*
Congratz to you as well Intricate_B

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