Let's Talk Evil
HadesRising
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Joined 8th June 2013
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Poetry Contest Description
I don't know if you've read my stuff. But I like evil, death,man paying for their sins, paranormal stuff. Let's see what you can do
bluegirl19
ErinH
3
Joined 14th May 2013
Forum Posts: 106
ErinH
Twisted Dreamer


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How many poems are we allowed to enter?
HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words


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just one
bluegirl19
ErinH
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Joined 14th May 2013
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ErinH
Twisted Dreamer


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Listening to Voices
In a small house in town
Alone in her chair
Sat a young woman
With a look of despair
In front of her, a fire
Roared with a grudge
But the women just sat there
She just couldn’t budge
For hours before
A deed had been done
The guilt had consumed her
And it had only begun
The woman was wed
To a husband of girth,
A few months did pass and
She had to give birth
Her husband she hated,
And he knew it too
So he’d go off for days
To screw a new shrew
All the while, she was left
To care for the child,
Yet as time went on passing
Her mind, it ran wild.
She began to have visions
Of things that weren’t real
But to her they were true
And she believed with zeal.
She began to see blood
Drip down windows and doors
And hear voices cry out
As she finished her chores
Then that day she went up
To wake the baby from sleep
She got to door, then paused,
And almost swooned in a heap.
For the baby she saw,
Had eyes like black pits
And was seizing around
In the midst of a fit.
The mother was frightened
Then a plan came to light
This babe was of Satan,
So the child she’d smite.
The voices inside her
Said if she’d adhere
She would get off scott free
While the child disappeared
So she dragged the babe down
While it screamed out in pain,
On the fire she tossed it
Thinking “Now God will reign”
But a mistake had been made
And the voices had lied,
For the baby screamed out
As its flesh burned and fried
The child was no demon
She realized in terror
Just another bad vision
That cause her to error
The mother just stood there
For an hour or two
Until it was finished
But she knew not what to do
So she sat in that chair
Couldn’t look left or right
As she stared at the bones
In the fires dark light
She can still hear the screams
Even now, in her cell
Her baby, it haunts her
In her head, in her hell.
In a small house in town
Alone in her chair
Sat a young woman
With a look of despair
In front of her, a fire
Roared with a grudge
But the women just sat there
She just couldn’t budge
For hours before
A deed had been done
The guilt had consumed her
And it had only begun
The woman was wed
To a husband of girth,
A few months did pass and
She had to give birth
Her husband she hated,
And he knew it too
So he’d go off for days
To screw a new shrew
All the while, she was left
To care for the child,
Yet as time went on passing
Her mind, it ran wild.
She began to have visions
Of things that weren’t real
But to her they were true
And she believed with zeal.
She began to see blood
Drip down windows and doors
And hear voices cry out
As she finished her chores
Then that day she went up
To wake the baby from sleep
She got to door, then paused,
And almost swooned in a heap.
For the baby she saw,
Had eyes like black pits
And was seizing around
In the midst of a fit.
The mother was frightened
Then a plan came to light
This babe was of Satan,
So the child she’d smite.
The voices inside her
Said if she’d adhere
She would get off scott free
While the child disappeared
So she dragged the babe down
While it screamed out in pain,
On the fire she tossed it
Thinking “Now God will reign”
But a mistake had been made
And the voices had lied,
For the baby screamed out
As its flesh burned and fried
The child was no demon
She realized in terror
Just another bad vision
That cause her to error
The mother just stood there
For an hour or two
Until it was finished
But she knew not what to do
So she sat in that chair
Couldn’t look left or right
As she stared at the bones
In the fires dark light
She can still hear the screams
Even now, in her cell
Her baby, it haunts her
In her head, in her hell.
HadesRising
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Joined 8th June 2013
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very nice. thanks for sharing
sweetdevil
CortneyB
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Joined 21st June 2013
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CortneyB
Thought Provoker


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I stalk my prey like a lioness,
I know I can make him confess.
He hurt one woman, killed another,
He finds his victims like all the others.
He lures them in with a kind smile,
Asks them to stay awhile.
He talks, sweet as honey,
Yet he is only in it for the money.
His employer, fat and rich,
Is married to a "cheating bitch."
He wants her gone forever,
He pays for the death of her and her lover.
So now I sit here, waiting for him,
Waiting to stop him from killing again.
I watch him leave his house,
I ready myself, and pounce!
No one sees as I throw him into my car,
We drive to a place I know, it's not very far.
I strap him to a metal bed,
Leather bands on his arms, legs, and head.
I hold a knife over his eyes,
I listen to his muffled cries.
"This is for you're murderous life,"
I whisper, lowering the knife.
I cut out the eyes,
And again he cries.
I cut out the tongue,
I'm not done.
Though he choked on his own blood,
I continue, watching the table flood.
I cut open his chest, grabbing the heart.
I cut it out, and tore it apart.
Stopping there, I walk away,
I have more people to hunt, more prey.
Evil doers, who I've sworn to vanquish,
Working hard to stop this anguish.
I work to bring peace to this town,
If you'll excuse me, I'll be leaving now.
Not sure if it's what you wanted, but it's pretty dark.
I know I can make him confess.
He hurt one woman, killed another,
He finds his victims like all the others.
He lures them in with a kind smile,
Asks them to stay awhile.
He talks, sweet as honey,
Yet he is only in it for the money.
His employer, fat and rich,
Is married to a "cheating bitch."
He wants her gone forever,
He pays for the death of her and her lover.
So now I sit here, waiting for him,
Waiting to stop him from killing again.
I watch him leave his house,
I ready myself, and pounce!
No one sees as I throw him into my car,
We drive to a place I know, it's not very far.
I strap him to a metal bed,
Leather bands on his arms, legs, and head.
I hold a knife over his eyes,
I listen to his muffled cries.
"This is for you're murderous life,"
I whisper, lowering the knife.
I cut out the eyes,
And again he cries.
I cut out the tongue,
I'm not done.
Though he choked on his own blood,
I continue, watching the table flood.
I cut open his chest, grabbing the heart.
I cut it out, and tore it apart.
Stopping there, I walk away,
I have more people to hunt, more prey.
Evil doers, who I've sworn to vanquish,
Working hard to stop this anguish.
I work to bring peace to this town,
If you'll excuse me, I'll be leaving now.
Not sure if it's what you wanted, but it's pretty dark.

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Does it have to be a supernatural evil or can it be any kind of odd evils?
oldmanadeus
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Joined 24th June 2013
Forum Posts: 31
Lost Thinker


Forum Posts: 31
Do any of you really know the Devil?
A Millennium ago as Lucifer was cast down I caught him by the throat on the way
I scalped him of his angels hair and used it to bind him to a rock
I asked him his name, he answered Lucifer the angel who refused to suck gods cock
laughing bitter sweetly as the angel tried to beseech me to let him be on his way
I said no for your one of the few who have hunted me to this day
You have the beauty of angel hair or not, just hold for a second this will be quite hot
The click of my fingers started the fire
You mean to burn my fee...
He begun to esquire, but before the sentence expired he felt the true purpose of fire
I left him there four days and four nights till his skin was glorious red
Then walked up quite Jauntily and nonchalantly hammered two Horns in his head
You are no longer an angel, your are but a devil and the color of shame is red
You can no longer sing or use light to bring love for yourself from the dead
I am now you master, I've been your true god all along
I've created you a kingdom and beautiful throne
which is yours until I come home
A Millennium ago as Lucifer was cast down I caught him by the throat on the way
I scalped him of his angels hair and used it to bind him to a rock
I asked him his name, he answered Lucifer the angel who refused to suck gods cock
laughing bitter sweetly as the angel tried to beseech me to let him be on his way
I said no for your one of the few who have hunted me to this day
You have the beauty of angel hair or not, just hold for a second this will be quite hot
The click of my fingers started the fire
You mean to burn my fee...
He begun to esquire, but before the sentence expired he felt the true purpose of fire
I left him there four days and four nights till his skin was glorious red
Then walked up quite Jauntily and nonchalantly hammered two Horns in his head
You are no longer an angel, your are but a devil and the color of shame is red
You can no longer sing or use light to bring love for yourself from the dead
I am now you master, I've been your true god all along
I've created you a kingdom and beautiful throne
which is yours until I come home

"Now Satan's Pissed"
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_4CmeLEJKntY/TJpttm6K68I/AAAAAAAABLw/eexEZLsp2yQ/s1600/devil+woman.jpg
Her piercing-eyes flash
deepest-hatred,
rat-bait poison runs
through her veins,
as pain drips from
her aluminum-smile,
the incinerator breath
melts my sugar,
once met for her.
Missing kisses
tells me I'm nothing,
never knew much.
Her head spins in circles,
vomit spews from her
pursed
lips,
she floats
all around me.
Jesus, I've spawned evil
and it wasn't
even his fault.
If this persists,
I'm going to need
an exorcist.
It's
bad enough
having her
hiss
at me,
but now
Satan's pissed!
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_4CmeLEJKntY/TJpttm6K68I/AAAAAAAABLw/eexEZLsp2yQ/s1600/devil+woman.jpg
Her piercing-eyes flash
deepest-hatred,
rat-bait poison runs
through her veins,
as pain drips from
her aluminum-smile,
the incinerator breath
melts my sugar,
once met for her.
Missing kisses
tells me I'm nothing,
never knew much.
Her head spins in circles,
vomit spews from her
pursed
lips,
she floats
all around me.
Jesus, I've spawned evil
and it wasn't
even his fault.
If this persists,
I'm going to need
an exorcist.
It's
bad enough
having her
hiss
at me,
but now
Satan's pissed!
HadesRising
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Joined 8th June 2013
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I like it. Very cruel
HadesRising
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you can post whatever you feel like sharing
HadesRising
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wow... these are all very good. keep rocking

"True Hate"
I could burn this place down
as many times as I'd like in my mind,
without any sympathy
for the girl or her mother
who live beneath me.
That bitch gave me a look
when I opened the front gate
like I was an equal to the
garbage behind the back gate,
so I channeled it as a fantasy;
I would torch this place away,
I would hope the trees
that are as dry as me catch like
wicker together like a flaming string,
so the whole town can burn down,
Hell well then have the world
burn like a comet,
an asteroid flying around
out of the void of space,
I can imagine the universe ablaze,
the stars already are,
and I stand as a cigarette
lights itself in my hand
consumed by the fire
I created, all by the power of imagination
all because of that stare at the gate,
all created by true hate.
I could burn this place down
as many times as I'd like in my mind,
without any sympathy
for the girl or her mother
who live beneath me.
That bitch gave me a look
when I opened the front gate
like I was an equal to the
garbage behind the back gate,
so I channeled it as a fantasy;
I would torch this place away,
I would hope the trees
that are as dry as me catch like
wicker together like a flaming string,
so the whole town can burn down,
Hell well then have the world
burn like a comet,
an asteroid flying around
out of the void of space,
I can imagine the universe ablaze,
the stars already are,
and I stand as a cigarette
lights itself in my hand
consumed by the fire
I created, all by the power of imagination
all because of that stare at the gate,
all created by true hate.
vortexman
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Joined 25th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 1260
Dangerous Mind


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"Accursed Relic"
It drew me into this shop one day.
This odd ancient talisman so old on the table it laid.
I met with the shop keeper who had a devilish looking grin. His eyes had mystery and a hint
of redness from within.
He said "He speaks to your heart does it not?"
I replied "I guess??"
The keeper said "For the right price all your
greatest wishes will be paid for and bought!"
I thought that is weird. Then he vanished and the lights went pitch black. I reappeared outside
his antiquity. And faintly I heard give it a test
drive why not????
So I looked in my hand and this talisman I grasped.
When I dropped it to the other hand it somehow singed these ancient letters in my palm.
Then I heard a voice In my head say. Concentrate and you will have 3 wishes of your choosing. Be wary of your final pick for they maybe your undoing!
So I was like ok... I wished for a huge mansion on the hill. Then instantly I appeared within this incredibly huge castle like Gothic tower!
2ndly I wish for more gold than I can ever spend.
Poof the mansion filled to the brim with piles and piles to no end.
Lastly I wish for endless time on Earth. So I can enjoy this wealth. And this supernatural rebirth.
Suddenly I felt so young vibrant..and light. No leg or back pain. As if I was given a new perfect
cloned body of me but in absolute perfect health!
Then the voice I heard in my head again said...so do you like...I said yes...How much for this wondrous
relic.....oh the voice said something small you won't miss.....and then it laughed hysterically.
The END
It drew me into this shop one day.
This odd ancient talisman so old on the table it laid.
I met with the shop keeper who had a devilish looking grin. His eyes had mystery and a hint
of redness from within.
He said "He speaks to your heart does it not?"
I replied "I guess??"
The keeper said "For the right price all your
greatest wishes will be paid for and bought!"
I thought that is weird. Then he vanished and the lights went pitch black. I reappeared outside
his antiquity. And faintly I heard give it a test
drive why not????
So I looked in my hand and this talisman I grasped.
When I dropped it to the other hand it somehow singed these ancient letters in my palm.
Then I heard a voice In my head say. Concentrate and you will have 3 wishes of your choosing. Be wary of your final pick for they maybe your undoing!
So I was like ok... I wished for a huge mansion on the hill. Then instantly I appeared within this incredibly huge castle like Gothic tower!
2ndly I wish for more gold than I can ever spend.
Poof the mansion filled to the brim with piles and piles to no end.
Lastly I wish for endless time on Earth. So I can enjoy this wealth. And this supernatural rebirth.
Suddenly I felt so young vibrant..and light. No leg or back pain. As if I was given a new perfect
cloned body of me but in absolute perfect health!
Then the voice I heard in my head again said...so do you like...I said yes...How much for this wondrous
relic.....oh the voice said something small you won't miss.....and then it laughed hysterically.

The END